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intensify effect 5 83.33%
raw killa 1 16.67%
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Old 08-31-04, 11:21 PM   #31
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CANNNNNN
WEEEEEE
ENDDDDDDD
THISSSSSSS
PLEZZZZZZZ........

i will return the favor of a vote..........
 
Old 08-31-04, 11:44 PM   #32
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Voted For: intensify effect

yo i gotta go with this boy he has better stucture and flow and vocab but he dont got good punches rawkilla had nun on him it was a ok battle
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Old 09-01-04, 12:55 AM   #33
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Voted For: raw killa

my vote goes to raw killa

breakdown:
ya name raw killa-but u mainly bitch.
N Last time ya gay ass saw a 'girl bare chest' it was grizzly tits *ha*

wordplay was alright not the best onpener though.

if u spit with ya whole click... B.A.M, u'll suck like a gun on lips full of lead
boy u went the wrong way, only good steps u'll think of on ya mind is me standing on ya head

this was a weak bar punch didnt move me.

this battle like sadam N bush...something u should of avoided
cuz my concepts sick, N you couldn’t flip shit with back-fiering toilettes

i like this bar pretty good.

N bitch,
ya web site a link for the retarts N impaired
my rhymes tight, u'll have to drop lines of hair to even compare!!

iight this bar was alright kinda on the weak side.

u needed a bitch-slap, asking 4 a battle wanting to see-me-later
when ya punches couldnt even ball-up to swing like ya avator...

personal punch pretty good closer.


dis bitch couldnt "intensify" an "effect" of his weak punches/
if he packed his fist wit "shots" of 151 or instant concussions/

like the wordplay alright opener.

time 2 put dis bitch unda da "wing"/
like a "father n son kind of" thing/ (lol)

pretty good punch kinda short though messed up the flow.

tlkn bout how bad he wanna callabo 2getha/
then tlk shit bout how he can rhyme betta/

weak bar i didnt feel this.

i "intensify" dis bitches verse wit hollywood special "effects"/
give him a star role in da next friday after next after next/
fill dis bitch thug wit slugs so he can die in da "projects"/
n change dis "challenged" rappaz name 2 "decrease in effect"/

good closer i like the wordplay and usage of his name.

well i think raw killa won this battle even know both the verses werent that good he still came harder.

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that shit was fucking dope as fuck sun the wordplay on the names was off the fucking meter that shit was fucking dope it started good and built up to fire dope fucking shit a 10/10 just on how you worked the names alone is a 11/10 damn sun fucking dope shit
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Old 09-01-04, 01:12 AM   #34
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Voted For: intensify effect

intensify effect

ya name raw killa-but u mainly bitch.
N Last time ya gay ass saw a 'girl bare chest' it was grizzly tits *ha*
^lol

if u spit with ya whole click... B.A.M, u'll suck like a gun on lips full of lead
boy u went the wrong way, only good steps u'll think of on ya mind is me standing on ya head
^omg overstretched like a motherF*cka
this battle like sadam N bush...something u should of avoided
cuz my concepts sick, N you couldn’t flip shit with back-fiering toilettes
^ha damn. even though stretchedlines

N bitch,
ya web site a link for the retarts N impaired
my rhymes tight, u'll have to drop lines of hair to even compare!!
^not registering for me.

u needed a bitch-slap, asking 4 a battle wanting to see-me-later
when ya punches couldnt even ball-up to swing like ya avator...
^decent

raw killa


dis bitch couldnt "intensify" an "effect" of his weak punches/
if he packed his fist wit "shots" of 151 or instant concussions/
^cool opener

time 2 put dis bitch unda da "wing"/
like a "father n son kind of" thing/ (lol)
^some choppy bs man.
tlkn bout how bad he wanna callabo 2getha/
then tlk shit bout how he can rhyme betta/
^um...so!
i "intensify" dis bitches verse wit hollywood special "effects"/
give him a star role in da next friday after next after next/
^oh man you lost steam after that opener.
fill dis bitch thug wit slugs so he can die in da "projects"/
n change dis "challenged" rappaz name 2 "decrease in effect"/
^omg I don't know what to say.

Hell raw killa you need work on consistency. You can't come out with one decent bar and just ban all structure for the rest of your lines.

Wasn't feelin' either a whole lot. intensify was ok with his stuff but damn raw killa jus became some wack rookie after that opener. vote intensify.
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Old 09-03-04, 07:02 PM   #35
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upp'in

this

joint.........................................
 
Old 09-07-04, 11:46 AM   #36
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up up up and away.........................................
 
Old 09-10-04, 01:21 AM   #37
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upp'in this battle yet again to close this once and for-all..................
 
Old 09-10-04, 12:03 PM   #38
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upp'in this join to be ova.............................
 
Old 09-12-04, 02:39 AM   #39
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upp'innnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnn
 
Old 09-12-04, 11:57 AM   #40
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upp'in this plus i will retunr the favor of a vote......
 
Old 09-13-04, 11:10 PM   #41
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what the fuck upp'in this bitch yet again and again and again.....
 
Old 09-15-04, 10:06 AM   #42
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Voted For: intensify effect

aiiight

not a strong battle..

but effect took it, seemed lke he had more complexicity in his verse, neither hit hard hittin personals, punches n metas were better from effect, but both could use some elevation..

killa, ya flow was aight, i wasnt really feelin ya opener, an u lacked creativity in ya punches, ya structure n how u set ya rhymes all seemed kinda basic, keep improvin tho dogg an no hate

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Old 09-15-04, 10:49 AM   #43
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Voted For: intensify effect

dis was so fuckin wkack i almost wasnt gonna vote
but what da fuck? ill vote anyway!

RW...
dis bitch couldnt "intensify" an "effect" of his weak punches/
if he packed his fist wit "shots" of 151 or instant concussions/
good concept...whack delivery...


IE...
ya name raw killa-but u mainly bitch.
N Last time ya gay ass saw a 'girl bare chest' it was grizzly tits *ha*
sounded good but execution of da flowm was whack...

nows when dis battle really gets bad!

RW...
time 2 put dis bitch unda da "wing"/
like a "father n son kind of" thing/ (lol)
advice: dont "lol" unless its funny...whack

IE...
if u spit with ya whole click... B.A.M, u'll suck like a gun on lips full of lead
boy u went the wrong way, only good steps u'll think of on ya mind is me standing on ya head
whack...no flow...mad stertched...

RW...
tlkn bout how bad he wanna callabo 2getha/
then tlk shit bout how he can rhyme betta/
even if its true...its whack...

IE...
this battle like sadam N bush...something u should of avoided
cuz my concepts sick, N you couldn’t flip shit with back-fiering toilettes
some of this was played(no hate we all do it)but u made it ur own wit dat second line bout da toilets...lol...

RW...
i "intensify" dis bitches verse wit hollywood special "effects"/
give him a star role in da next friday after next after next/
fill dis bitch thug wit slugs so he can die in da "projects"/
n change dis "challenged" rappaz name 2 "decrease in effect"/
was da friday line supposed to be an insult?
da second bar in dis sequence was super lyrical ur nice!
........
nahh!kikikikkkklol...it was wost den da rest of ur shit...AND DAT WAS DA CLOSER!

IE...
ya web site a link for the retarts N impaired
my rhymes tight, u'll have to drop lines of hair to even compare!!
this was bad! da bad kind of bad, not slang 4 good...
hair is thin not tight n neither was dat bar...

IE...
u needed a bitch-slap, asking 4 a battle wanting to see-me-later
when ya punches couldnt even ball-up to swing like ya avator...
hardly rhymed, not iteresting at all...
AND DAT WAS DA CLOSER!

THIS WAS SO SHITTY IM NOT GONNA BREAK DOWN THA CATAGOERIES...I.E. WON BECAUSE OF THA LINE ABOUT "TOILETTS"

IF U DONT LIKE MY OPINION,TO BAD.I HOPE THEY MAKE BOTH U BETTER...
U GUYS NEED SOME FLOW N DEFFINITLY WAAAAAY BETTER
CREATIVITY...

fuck i.e....fuck raw killa...im out!
peace
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