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05-29-04, 11:22 AM | #1 |
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Shadow Edge Vs FlowInteleigent
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05-29-04, 12:41 PM | #2 | |
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checkin in shadows how about 14-16 lines? and m-section the least u could do is spell my name right thats 2 weeks in a row :-D no prob tho ~!1!~
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05-29-04, 01:16 PM | #3 |
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Lol you're name is enoying for some reason LOL i will never spell it right
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05-29-04, 04:42 PM | #4 | |
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Check. 14 sounds good.
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06-02-04, 12:50 AM | #5 | |
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i dont know if this is due by tonight or tomorrow night so here it is now
lyrically drunk...so my cerebrum'll have shots bustin-at-heads shadow aint hard...ill crush Abs till his chest starts touching-his-legs punches swerve RB is full of armless emcees...no one's feelin-ya-verse im beatin your words...bitch ill cut the action...so i can weaken-ya-verbs its more than alledged when i drop you'll be closer-to-dead battlin flow is like a condom...your in way "over-your-head" shadows your gay in every aspect...besides your pretty-lame from your rhymes...to ya pic...right down to your shitty-name straight as an arrow in public...but he's a faggot-in-stealth only way he'll "fuck with a pussy" is if he "battled-himself" you came in this thread with hand on trig...then renigged-in-depression cause unlike Mel and Dan....this bitch aint lethal-with-weapons and i hope you rehearsed ya verse before you started-dissin ya verbs come worse and my intuition is that you-into-wishin ~!1!~
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06-02-04, 03:57 AM | #6 | |
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Aight.. really didn't have too much time this week so here goes:
Kid grab a clue, I’m just fucking better than you Shit, even killah asked me to lead your whack crew “Murder emcees religiously”? quit fronting dude … cuz its more like begging admins to get peeps jewed Win’s mine, my verses perfect hundreds, yours just 99’s … shit’s not a compliment, just the last time I seen those lines I’m on a different level, you just gassed g, So if I was your breath, you still couldn’t catch me Leave me rattled? Couldn’t hit your own shadow … and your hardest punches are in your topical battles This cats fucked up to put it mild, fucking pedophile Kid skeet whenever he get in touch with his inner child So its over, get going, you lost n its clearly showing I put two in your head, really get that intelligence flowing
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06-02-04, 06:52 PM | #7 | |
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good shyt uppin for votes ~!1!~
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06-03-04, 03:49 PM | #8 |
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flow - once again another nice spit by you...u ahd a good flow....nice multi's and punches....hot meta's.....werk on usin more personals....but u always show your creativity in ur meta's and that helps....good drop by you....give it a 8.4/10....
shadows - dayum...u stareted off decent wit ur first 2 bars...then kicked it up and threw hot punches...that punches in topicals line killed it.....and you closer was creative....both of ya verses were very creative....i think the flow was a tie.....meta's go to flow.....u took the overall punches....not really any personals in this battle....but it still was a nice evenly matched battle.... Vote - Shadows Edge....he had the punches in this that hit harder and he had more of them....
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06-03-04, 08:40 PM | #9 |
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This battle was pretty good i liked Shadows structure alot it flowed well but Flow's was a bit stretched but readabel also.. i got dissapointed at flows verse he used lyrically... damn thats wack erm you verse was pretty ok....... i just dint like some of your lines the only line i liked was the fuck with a pussy line i thought that shadow edges took this with puinches and the first 2 lines were funny personals cos killah also asked me lol anyway i thought his vocab was ok could have been better but he defently came harder..
V/Shadow.
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06-03-04, 09:13 PM | #10 |
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----nice shit pretty good battle----
---Flow Inteligent--- good battle homie u came hard wit ya metas...ur flow was good but like L.I sed work on ur personels...i personally think if u did have some good personals i think u could of took this battle....i liked when u were dissin on his name that shit was actully hillarious...lmao...good battle homeboy....overall i'll give u a B ---Shadow Edge---- good shit....u deffintly took this battle wit out a shadow of a doubt....u had better personals better stucture...that 99 verse was funny as hell lmao...ur pretty creative homie keep it up...ur ending was cool i liked the way u used his name... overall good verse....imma give u an A on this ----After Thoughts---- This was a well matched battle both had good verses and wordplay....flow took it wit metas while shadow took in stucture,personals,worplay and flow...so imma give my vote to shadow edge good shit vote=Shadow Edge |
06-03-04, 09:50 PM | #11 | |
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lyrically drunk...so my cerebrum'll have shots bustin-at-heads
shadow aint hard...ill crush Abs till his chest starts touching-his-legs FLOWS WELL,BUT I DONT SEE ANYTHING HARD HITTING... punches swerve RB is full of armless emcees...no one's feelin-ya-verse im beatin your words...bitch ill cut the action...so i can weaken-ya-verbs SAME GOES FOR THIS LINE its more than alledged when i drop you'll be closer-to-dead battlin flow is like a condom...your in way "over-your-head" HAHAHAHA THATS SOME FUNNY SHIT shadows your gay in every aspect...besides your pretty-lame from your rhymes...to ya pic...right down to your shitty-name LOL@SHITTY NAME,NOT HARD HITTING BUT KINDA SILLY straight as an arrow in public...but he's a faggot-in-stealth only way he'll "fuck with a pussy" is if he "battled-himself" LOL MAY HAVE SEEN THE CONCEPT BEFORE you came in this thread with hand on trig...then renigged-in-depression cause unlike Mel and Dan....this bitch aint lethal-with-weapons UMM..NOT FEELIN IT and i hope you rehearsed ya verse before you started-dissin ya verbs come worse and my intuition is that you-into-wishin CLOSING SUCKS....WISHIN ? IT AINT GOIN ANYWHERE....JUST MULTIES Kid grab a clue, I’m just fucking better than you Shit, even killah asked me to lead your whack crew PERSONAL,NOT REALLY A PUNCH “Murder emcees religiously”? quit fronting dude … cuz its more like begging admins to get peeps jewed I DONT LIKE IT.....FRONTING DUDE/PEEPS JEWED DOESNT EVEN RHYME......U SHOULDA READ UR RHYMES OUT LOUD CUZ WHEN U READ IT,IT DOESNT FLOW.....ONLY THE LAST 2 WORDS MAYBE.... Win’s mine, my verses perfect hundreds, yours just 99’s … shit’s not a compliment, just the last time I seen those lines I GET IT...U DIDNT WORD IT PROPERLY..I WOULD'VE PUT YEAR IN THERE SOMEWHERE..... I’m on a different level, you just gassed g, So if I was your breath, you still couldn’t catch me LOL,PRETTY GOOD Leave me rattled? Couldn’t hit your own shadow … and your hardest punches are in your topical battles PERSONAL,NOT TOO HARD HITTING...ITS OK This cats fucked up to put it mild, fucking pedophile Kid skeet whenever he get in touch with his inner child MAN,U COULDA USED A MUCH MUCH BETTER PUNCH WITH "INNER CHILD" LOL...U KILLED IT THOUGH.....NOTHIN HARD HITTING THERE So its over, get going, you lost n its clearly showing I put two in your head, really get that intelligence flowing PRETTY GOOD WAY TO GET AT HIM .......GOOD CLOSING CONCEPT IS A LITTLE PLAYED.....NOT IN THOSE EXACT WORDS....BUT U KNOW WHAT I MEAN PUNCHES WISE,U BOTH HAD ABOUT THE SAME......I LIKED THE CONDOM LINE BY FLOW,N BATTLE URSELF WAS OK........SHADOW,CATCH BREATH LINE WAS STARIGHT...TOPICAL WAS OK,BUT I THINK FLOW HAD SOME OK PERSONALS TOO IF U LOOK AT IT,U HAD A BETTER CLOSE...I'D SAY PUNCHES ARE EVEN.....BUT WHEN I LOOK AT THE 2 VERSES,FLOW'S FLOWED BETTER ,SEEMED LIKE A MORE INTELLIGENT VERSE LOL@USING HIS NAME.....BUT YEA,HIS MULTIES WERE BETTER......SHADOW,U COULD HAVE WON IF U WORDED THAT YEAR LINE BETTER,AND THE INNER CHILD......U NEED WORK ON WORDING PUNCHES BETTER.....AND,INSTEAD OF USING PERSONALS AS PUNCHES,USE THEM AS SETUP LINES INSTEAD,SO TAHT WAY U CAN STILL GET A PUNCH IN EVERY BAR..........CUZ UR SETUP LINES ARE VERY VERY WEEK......... VOTE =FLOW
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06-04-04, 08:35 AM | #12 |
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Thanks for votes...
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