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07-24-03, 03:30 AM | #1 | |||||||
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$Keepin work$
IP: 45E5 BE55
yo this is a little piece me an my boy is workin on.Pretty soon I'll make it an audio.Tell me whut ya'll think
$KEEPIN WORK$ MAST3RM!ND street wise,half baked,addicted ta dirt/ im just a hussilin fool know for keepin' work/ A nightmare like elm,enter a world of hurt/ always got that green and we keep it burnt/ yo i'm project,that means a suspect/ since i'm already survyed,I might as well blaze/ We from a-town,city of tha stars and movin bricks/ slangin halves,quarters,dimes, and nicks/ young thugs out in tha world dyin' fa shit/ I'm a hustla meaning that i'm built fa this/ Tha whole worlds against ya,tryin ta get rich/ can't trust shit,tha world's a bitch/ |
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07-24-03, 03:33 AM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 45E5 BE55
Tell me whut ya'll think.This is just some of it.It has'nt really been edited.
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07-24-03, 02:30 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 698F ADAF
hey ya'll hit this up.
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07-24-03, 02:36 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 5130 1CF2
lyrically, I liked it dawg. But every cat raps about that, get deeper, naw mean. But I thought it was good. just bring more of you into your style. ONE
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07-24-03, 05:33 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 5130 1CF2
I read this already
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07-24-03, 07:27 PM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: 4011 5C1E
aight......first it's a lil basic......but anything with a beat can be mADE TIGHT if they put the right style.....so as text it's not that great....but for audio it should be aight........and if u want it to be a better threat ur vocab has to be deeper.....and more symbolic....but then again most audios out there r just simple rhymes raped right......so good luck with ur audio
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07-25-03, 12:11 AM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: AC6D 84DA
Thanx.any more comments?
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08-03-03, 02:40 AM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: 399E F0FD
come on yall uppin for more feedback. I'm thinkin bout makin this shit 2 nite.Tell me whut yall think.
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08-03-03, 04:24 AM | #9 | |||||||
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IP: 399E F0FD
Hit this shit up ya'll
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