yeah no probs... you dont get the win though...lol... do you?

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i dun think so... i dun know.. dude.. this is gay tho lol..... i guess we can give a lil more time.. come vote guys.. we will return the favors.......

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Stop sleeping on this battle dorks.. post ya vote and leave a link..

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there was a mad dik ryder up in here shit! yo i think One-Man-Band 1 this hands down!

opener:One
punches:One
flow:One
structure:One
wordplay:One
vocab:One
personals:One
overall:One

i thought he destroyed and i aint dik rydin i dunt even know you kids so yo whats with the dig rydin ?

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lol.....ok uppin for some other votes with explinations and can actually poll ..

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fucckkeer my vote couldnt poll!!!... i thought i could winnit... which i can... right...

uppin

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mcs aint what they used-to-be.. wack kids, my dispels-are-insane..
no votes for calamity, cos bitin chinos the only way he XL's-in-this-game..
nice wordplay 8.5/10

droppin his mic-fast, on the run, afraid of the shame that his types-cast..**
sorry nigga, but youre the first black man to be classified as white-trash..
hmmmm 7/10 nice closer

really nice verse one man..........some goodd punches.personals......but you focused more on killing him than punches......lines a lil strecthed (mine 2) but ur multiples help.


Calamity:
ima save the worst for last, his lines are toys to play wit..
and like you said:
nice closer usin his own words gainst him umm 6.7/10

no-merits,scared hairless,tho he not a bald eagle..
couldnt change identitys for the better............
............if he played the character of smeagle..
8.5/10 nice diss.....

he wouldnt be high among "vets" ona ladder in vietnam..
whys this dude rappin, his "instruments" are pom-poms..
nice worplay wit his name an stuff..........8/10


close battle pretty good but im goin with Calamity cuz his verse flowed easier and had more so harder punches..... One bands tlaked obut killin which was ok but not necessarily punches

plz return the favor...

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my victims bruise-n-bleed, this dude steppin again is new-to-me..*
surprising, cos usually my battle raps end up as eulogies..
FLOWS NICE,BUT NO PUNCH IN THERE
mcs aint what they used-to-be.. wack kids, my dispels-are-insane..
no votes for calamity, cos bitin chinos the only way he XL's-in-this-game..
DECENT PUNCH...U MAKE UR LINES TOO LONG THOUGH

Plating my knuckles-with-brass, Ill slam clam's face-into-glass..
burn the herb, leave a match by your corpse after I drench-it-in-gas..
NOT A PUNCH,ITS A DECENT LINE,BUT NO PUNCH
attack-with-an-axe, beat ya till theres no bones-left-to-crack..
Twist up ya neck till you can count-tha amounta holes-in-ya-back..
SAME AS ABOVE,SOUNDS GOOD IF U DROPPIN AN OPEN MIC OR SOMETHING,BUT IT AINT A PUNCH

propellin-the-pain.. ya cant last, ya half assed imagery is faulty-n-merciful..
punches missin-me while my verse crunches with riveting multis-n-personals..
NOT A PUNCH TO SAY U HAVE MULTIES N PERSONALS
snubbin-n-hurtin-you..id end it, bitch, but i wanna see ya suffer-in-pain..
cos frankly this kid couldnt hold down if i handed him cuffs-n-a-chain..
NOT A HARD PUNCH

tough-in-the-brain, server minds wit clever rhymes, while loosin-my-mental..
im fuckin crazy, now y'all understand how easily i beat dudes-with-a-pencil..
HMMM....I'M NOTICING A PATTERN HERE
rip bitches fit for clips from the six clipped to my hips, flip'd hits u threw-me..
this kids dick's licked by his click, crew voters, but im a misfit-for-newbies..
NOTHIN THERE

by even challengin me again, i can see you got no more than failin-grade..
fuck a icepick, ill impale-a-blade, calams no em, but hes still trailer-made..
LOL PRETTY FUNNY
droppin his mic-fast, on the run, afraid of the shame that his types-cast..**
sorry nigga, but youre the first black man to be classified as white-trash..
U ALREADY HAD THE PREVIOUS PUNCH THAT SAID HE WAS TRAILOR MADE..ISNT THAT THE SAME THING???





no-merits,scared hairless,tho he not a bald eagle..
couldnt change identitys for the better............
............if he played the character of smeagle..
I LIKED THE BALD EAGLE,BUT I DUNNO WHO IS SMEAGLE SORRY..SHOULD HAVE EXPLAINED

he wouldnt be high among "vets" ona ladder in vietnam..
OK PUNCH
whys this dude rappin, his "instruments" are pom-poms..
WEAK
bomb-frauds,you gassed,i light matches to biters..
want a personal ?, you belong back in the cypher..
NOTHIN IN THERE
the only way you get a win,is the votes i give to you..
yada yada yada yada..........^and i mean that literal..
LOL I PEEPED THAT,4-5 HE WON N U WERE ONE OF THE VOTERS..NICE PERSONAL

you couldnt soar above par,if dropped from a plane..
WEAK
and you dont have g/fs,that's explained in ya name..
LMFAO..GOOD PLAY ON HIS NAME MAN
wouldnt be a starter for a team,if in a dream was expected..
even in fairy tales you get neglected, and rejected..
WEAK
ya rhymes trail away in memory,like washed out jeans..
hes addicted to herbs, just like crack house fiends..
IT'S AIGHT..DONT REALLY LIKE HERB LINES
stop and watch,maybe you can shake them newb habits..
you should be a trackstar,usin all them damn dashes..
ROFL...YEA I HATE DASHES MYSELF...THIS COULD BE WORDED BETTER,BUT GOOD CONTENT
ima save the worst for last, his lines are toys to play wit..
and like you said:

DIDNT REALLY LIKE THE CLOSING........

COMMENT.....THIS WAS VERY HARD TO JUDGE...CUZ ONE MAN HAD A LOT OF GOOD MULTIES,FLOW WAS BETTER,BUT U SPITTIN LIKE ITS FOR AN AUDIO...CUZ ALL THOSE MULTIES WOULD SOUND NICE...BUT SAYIN U GONNA LIGHT A MATCH TO HIM AINT HITTIN HARD MAN....IN AN OPEN MIC TYPE THING U'D WIN..BUT I GO BY THE RULE,PUNCHES WIN BATTLES...IN TEXT ESPECIALLY...N THIS IS A BATTLE....U HAD THAT CHINO XL PUNCH I LIKED,N THE TRAILOR TRASH LINE WAS FUNNY...BUT THEN U USED THE SAME CONTENT IN 2 OF UR BARS,ESPECIALLY UR CLOSER......THAT WAS A WRONG MOVE

CALAMITY....SEEMED LIKE A MORE BASIC VERSE,MULTI N VOCAB WISE...BUT,I'M ONE TO ALWAYS SAY..THAT SHIT ALMOST DOESNT MATTER IN A BATTLE..ITS ALL ABOUT PUNCHES,N U HAD MORE PUNCHES IN THIS BATTLE....N PERSONALS AS WELL.....THE VOTING THING,PLAYIN OFF HIS NAME N THE DASHES ...THOSE HIT THE HARDEST...U DID HAVE SOME WEAK LINES...BUT I HAD TO JUDGE BY WHO HAD MORE PUNCHES...N PERSONALS...N THAT WAS CALAMITY......ONE MAN'S VERSE DID SEEM MORE ADVANCED DUE TO THE MULTIES....BUT MY COMMENT ABOVE STANDS......

VOTE CALAMITY....NO HATE

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us waiver, waiver, us entry waiver, criminal record travel, denied entry us

dayum^ thats a breakdown!.. uppin for more votes..

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okay you said ud both return the fav what happened man?......

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ima return it when i get the chance, dont worry...

uppin

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What up emcees! Calamity, I have to give this round to One Man Band home boy! Reasons being a)he came with stronger metaphorically b)punchlines were creatively put together and c) you hung yourself with your opening line it was just too weak on the lyrical side "no merits, scared hairless, tho he's not a bald eagle" You should took more time to construct your rhyme ---- no diss, that's just what it is.

Peace
Barz&Penstripes

^lol.. i dont feel like swaying right now.. to tired.. my first line was a metaphore jsut so you know.. no merits ,scared hairless, tho he not a bald eagle... that makes pretty good sense hehe... but i mean, you got ya opinion and ima respect that... uppin for more votes... 3-0 me..

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I have no idea what most of these people are thinking! OMB clearly annihilated Calamity. If you understand the scheme and flow of OMB's rhyme you'll see that it's damn near flawless! He was way more original with lines like:

by even challengin me again, i can see you got no more than failin-grade..
fuck a icepick, ill impale-a-blade, calams no em, but hes still trailer-made..

that's good shyt! the multi's were everywhere.he could have been more personal though. other than that OMB had this in the bag!

Calamity,

stop and watch,maybe you can shake them newb habits..
you should be a trackstar,usin all them damn dashes..

this was easily ya best line ....
pretty damn good one if i do say so myself... but the rest of it was blahhh!

Let's look at a few of them...

you couldnt soar above par,if dropped from a plane..

whys this dude rappin, his "instruments" are pom-poms..

ya rhymes trail away in memory,like washed out jeans..
hes addicted to herbs, just like crack house fiends..

these were terrible. You were a lot more personal ... especially with that vote that you gave him to win... that's kinda sick! confusing as all hell but sick. Anyway, your wack lines outweighed ya good ones that you had so I'd say that OMB got this>