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Voted For: Plutonium

string9487 :

this nigga just a Mule, cuz all u do is pack shit
neva heard ya single, guess u aint "radio"active
^^dope opener 9/10
eh yo when them rifle's click
they have yo ass scramblin for safety like Michael Vick
^^lol good bar nice consistency 7/10
I'll snipe this prick, got a vest thats twice as thick
but them things gon hit u, cuz lifes a bitch
^^good shit nice multies 8/10
im aimin at ya "bean", but nigga this aint Goya
u a ""gifted" rapper cuz i wouldnta paid for ya
^^weak 4/10
Dis g wanna bitch, u can recieve a hunnid clips
those rhymes so bad, they make Stevie wonda flinch(ooouch)
^^ lol good meta decent punch 6/10
dog u trippin, u need to get u some AK right
i spit Acid bars, make Plutonium, decay to Half-Life*
^^ i like the concept and meta 7/10
there aint nothin to u, u aint gon pop that
drop that, u just a pussey in a jock strap askin for is cock back(ooooh)
^^good multies 6/10
rap verse allowin hoes n sluts, wit no flows n such
wit crippled ass flows like they hold a crutch
^^decent bar good multies 6/10
unlike Jay, and Kells u the Less Of Both Worlds
n nebody that reads ya text, is gon hurl
^^just no 1/10
u can exit now... , but u wont b right back
cuz u like that, in the room gettin spanked by Mike Jack
^^wack 2/10

overall : 56/ 100 (56%)

Plutonium:

Like the weather...the chance of you winning is vain
like if you sold Strepsils...noone would choke in pain
^^good meta decent opener 7/10
your game...giving the word "failure" embarressment
claim you off da wack...when theres no comparisons
^^lmao good shit 9/10
don't be arrogant...your ego's the size of a elephant
he even think showin' his 26-19 record is triumphant
^^doesnt really rhyme but i see what u mean 4/10
I destroy you for enjoyment, so kid please don't fight
"Da Bury's Finest", that's why his corpse remains ripe
^^decent meta good punch 6/10
kid's not abstract...but you can't class him as object
kid's wack...no wonder Fashion's OPTIONAL SUBJECT!
^^wack 3/10
fact is this kid sucks, I'll destroy him with just a fork
who's using strings...a sewing machine does the work
^^lol good shit 8/10
kid's a jerk...I'll rip him up and fucking sew him again
the only highlight of his verse is when he just began
^^again began dont rhyme 0 points 0/10
the string's gonna snap...it don't matter how I say it
got numbers in his name...it's his wackness calculated
^^dopest bar of your verse good flow 10./10
to ranking 9487...that's more than RV's inactive heads
name's string...no wonder he's hanging on by a thread
^^dam hot 8/10
he can't go far in his career...even if it's his big dream...
CAUSE NOONE KNOWS HOW LONGS A PIECE OF STRING!!!
^^just stop 3/10

overall : 58/100 (58%)

v/ Plu

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Voted For: String9487

Pretty Close Battle:The Factors Of Thi:String Your Vocabulary Was Decent Andvanced A Little But Your Structure Wasnt To Decent...Alot Of Stertched Lines And Short Lines Didnt Make It Look Decent Punches Was Alright.......Personals Hmmm....
Over All This Was On Vocab And Punches.......8/10

Economics:
Very Good Structure It Was Decent I Liked How All The Lines Lined Up......Vocabulary Was Some What Basic Some What Not....Punches Was Decent And Personasl Was Alright........WordPlay Was There And Was Also Decent.......OverAll I Give It A 7.5/10

Reason:
Vocabulary Was Kind Of Basic.....Personasl Wasnt Too Good But It Was There And Punches I Wasnt Feeling.......

Vote/String

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Voted For: String9487

String remindss me of Nore for some reason. LOL

Pluto- you didnt really have any punches, really needa work on that, stop focusing on structure because it is fucking your verse up day after day.The nameplays you did were iight but did'nt hit very hard and definatly werent creative.
String-stop talking about guns. aother than that you brought some good shit, it had a lot of multis and flow, even though it didnt help and a couple punches were good especially the half-life one, creative shit.and also stop making comment after "hot" bars and stop using quotations.

V/String

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RTF.....or I will kill your mom by putting a skin eating virus in her pussy

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Opposite of Cold= The Cartel
Dear Others=Hitchcock
Kill That Static=Hitchcock