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Old 03-11-03, 10:36 AM   #1
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Blazin' It ft. Defiance

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This jus some verses we dropped... on a ol school beat ya'll know... and yes i sound real high on this track when i'm talkin and not rappin.. and yes i do diss Ja Rule (theres two meanings to the X line)..

anyways.. check this.. raw coast to coast canada...

1st: Defiance
2nd: Dariel Shariem

Hi Fi
Lo Fi

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Old 03-11-03, 10:38 AM   #2
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I'll Subscribe The Thread And Peep Later !
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Old 03-11-03, 10:58 AM   #3
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lol always liked dis beat anywas listening first cat is ok nuthin special but nice needs lil more work on flow production is kool tho

ok u have better lyrics sum nice lines in there hear and there flow is kool also needs a lil bit more polishing and need to raise da vocals a lil but other den dat was overall a nice track not my type of style to listen to on da regular but i can dig it anyway uppin and keep droppin.......
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Old 03-11-03, 11:02 AM   #4
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thanks.. uppin
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Old 03-11-03, 03:04 PM   #5
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first guy ... his lyrics are whack...his flow is iight,he's iight

dariel your lyrics are better than his, your flow is straight

it's an iight drop

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Old 03-11-03, 03:25 PM   #6
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aight... thanks and uppin
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Old 03-12-03, 02:14 AM   #7
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first guy is alright needs a lot of work on not stretching his word and you can hear him breath when hes trying to read his lyricks and dont know what to say next

second guy is better but watch all the like lines lol ah there we go just need to work on a more natural flow and maybe a lil more energy thats all

good job though i like the ohhh ohhh beat always did peace
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Old 03-12-03, 02:35 PM   #8
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aight... peace
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