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04-29-05, 05:44 PM | #16 | |||||
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Stop Freeposting. Cali Had The Better Verse. Come To Grips That Youre Not As Dope As You Think You Are.
...: This herb listed ya interests as spitting......funny i thought hos swallowed King of Rapverse?...you couldnt pull it off with as many shots as Diallo!! ^^good metaphor ok setup could have been better 6/10 Hate Bloods??.......but you pussy dont you bleed monthly or something? You can write ya verse on ya bandanna and couldnt 'C' one of my punches!! ^^decent punch not much else 4/10 That out the way newb basher everyone of us know that you wack Slobk a gang banger of course!!!...all C.owards R.un I.N P.acks!! ^^another decent punch.. wasnt really feeling it 4/10 Eleavation not in your future like popped balloons and crashed airlines Plus you came to this battle shook since my name surrounds you like 5 times Good first bar, it wasnt a set up but good meta, 2nd line was ok 6/10 ........... shit even you said that you trash! Cuz in this battle you like little boxes on windshields........a EZ PASS!! ^^well we all know that last line was stretched to shit, but dope meta 6/10 Overall: 26/50 (52%) $lobK: Your Career Is Diminished..Dis "Nerd Goin Downhill".."Like Honor Roll Students On Ramps".. I'm Shook? Homie Went Into "Witness Protection" Almost As Much Times As His Rank.. * You started this bar off perfect but Ramps and Rank do not rhyme, you only get credit for the meta 3/10 When He Lose..He Creates An Alias After..Homeboi Neva "Blessed" Like "Atheist Chapters".. Think Ya Personality Is A Factor? Stop Playin Hard..We All Noe CALI Is The Place For Actors.. ^^2 more good metas, stop capitalizing the first letter of each word, it stretches your bar, so then you have to make the size smaller -2 points for the noob move 5/10 I Cant Relate..With All The "Quakes" In CALI..Its Hard To Have Ur Mind In A "Steady State".. Elevate? In A Room Filled With "Obese Kids"..The Only Time Peeps Think U A "Heavyweight".. ^^again with the capitals just stop that. decent bar 5/10 D-ICE "Melted", U Couldnt Stand The "Heat"? Changed Ya Name But Failed To B Discreet.. Failure Creeped..So I Hope U Take "Poetry To Da Heart"..So U Could Finally "Rhyme To Beats".. ^^ seen something very similar to your 2nd line, stop with the wack multies it killed the impact, You should have wrote something else besides 'Failure Creeped' ok bar 4/10 Cocky Homo..Talk Out Ya Ass So Much..But Never Once Have I Seen This Queer Defend.. Sick When? "CALIPH" Emerged And Then Went To "CALI" Wen Da PH Scale Overtook Him.. ^^im sorry but that PH shit was stupid. if the ph scale OVER!took him then the ph would still be there. And Overtook Him & Queer Defend do not rhyme. Him and Defend dont even rhyme. And you think youre verse was better with 2 non rhyming bars 2/10 Overall: 19/50 (38%) Vote/ ... Battle Closed ... Wins By K.O 3-0
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