iight listenin... first verse was pretty decent- flows good, lyrics o.k- you sound alot like senser only your voice aint got his bass- style is pretty good- all it sounds like you need really is polishing, and some more stand out lines... hook was cool- good beat, all in all not a bad peice, just keep droppin em.

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yo dat oh no track was hott man i was feelin dat i didnt hear no otha tracks but oh no was off the hook

illy intro,,,like the sample...great delivery great flow...beats pretty good...multis r excellent great story telling and punches as well could use more metas and similies too and over dubs (more of them) chorus is not catchy at all verses r good production could come up...

lol yea you do sound like senser a lot. Good thing not bad.

aiight, firstverse wasn't bad. Nice flow. Some nice multi's in there. Beat was aiight. but second verse was pretty nice too. Good flow and lyrics to it.

but damn, nice multi's tho, man. props on that shit, made it nice to listen too. pretty nice track, glad I listened. nice job, o. 8/10 pc

holla @ this:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172212

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Listening..

Beat is good..
Quality is pretty nice..

Your voice is chill..
Flow is pretty good as well..

Your overall lyrics are good..
Emotion is alright..

Hook is ill..

Overall, i liked this track..

Keep it up..

G'Lookin Fam...

nice song i liked it......keep dropping....flow on point delivery gud its propa....

Nice beat, good flow and delivery, dubs on point, nice hook incorporating the beat, lyrics were solid and I could make them out clearly. Best thing I've heard on RV honestly that I can remember, was nice man.