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05-10-10, 01:15 PM | #1 | |
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Induelz - Your verse was on point for the most part. I enjoyed the word choice and the structure with the words that coincide within was done pretty well. It was good that you posted your verse 1st.
Dominating-DT - Structure was a bit odd, but the word selection was done good as well. When I began to read your verse, I thought some of the lines were okay... Descent Drop Here
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