Voted For: ~Babylon~

wow, imagery was sick, story line was deffinaTELY killer,
your structure n flow was on point in this piece, best ive seen from you babs, ryhme scheme was good in all parts, the closer got me though, that shit is what a topical is all about, it hit hard, your whole approach followed the topic to a T...
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MISTA, your verse wasnt really that good, ryhme scheme was horrible...full bars constantly didnt ryhme....structure was pretty stretched, it wouldve been ok but you had no inner assonasance ryhmes or basic inners to connect your flow in a good manner...i expected more from you, especially on a topic like this, you didnt set the stage well in the beginning for your drop...better luck next time........
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babs, just overall dope piece n better everything

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!