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07-21-08, 09:53 PM | #4 | ||
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This started much better then it ended my friend. Your opening stanza was pretty dope man. But by the second, I started losing interest. The wording became more elementary and your flow become weaker. Emotion started amazing but went down to average, same with your visual opinions. Decent piece with a dope start. You've got potential -- hope to see you venting into it.
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