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Old 11-16-03, 07:05 PM   #1
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27. T-Square (1-3) vs. 28. Lethargic (0-0)

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Your topic: open sesame
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Old 11-17-03, 09:57 AM   #2
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In...Promise Not To Forget This Time, heh.
 
Old 11-19-03, 09:03 PM   #3
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In......
I will vote,open sesamie., seeds now, eh
 
Old 11-22-03, 01:12 AM   #4
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I dont rap about seeds, thats not my steez,
But on the streets I can see about fourty thieves/
Then I hear screams and the gang wont leave/
Untill all fourty enter 'the cave' like open sesamie/
It shoulda never happened the pyramids of the city/
Provided cover for the virginity stolen fourty times, for whom I pitty/
Gang bang its a damn shame chivalry is deceased/
But when the legend was told the Original theives raped and killed like beasts/
Open sesamie and the destiny is legs instead of doorways/
Given STD's buy at least three after stealing third base/
Goes on living going vilage to town constantly spreading/
Her on knees or opening the V you can see the Crab Breading/
And its still seen but the oral sex is still claimed with payment/
To the open sores and discolores explain what the pain ment/
The Trojan horse cant stop fourty thieves but can the disease/
Your gettin dogged dirty livin with flea's herpies, and HIV/
All because you yelled for someone to open sesamie//


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Old 11-22-03, 09:33 PM   #5
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I've got 15 minutes to type this...sorry. I promised I wouldn't no show though.

One minute she's filled with laughter
That I've sought after..
since her birth flipped my world..
upside down..and brought this bastard
to his knees, in tears for my baby
she's so beautiful in every way...
And has an unrelenting hate for me
But Lately..
She doesn't even have a finger to wave at me
Cuz I broke her heart..
When I made a vow, to protect my child
And I'm the one that broke it apart..
From the start I knew...
it's dangerous for me to hold her..
Diseases are no excuse...the fact that I'm bi-polar
Has no bearing on the wrong i gave..
To my innocent daughter..kin and underage
Now there's nothing but a stone heart..
Thrown with cold shoulders...frozen
And emotional barriers that'll never be broke open
Only hopin...that I can at least see her grow..then
Maybe one day...she could commence the spoken
words...that have been dead for so long
Years Gone...and I can't find the password
To open the tomb..
She's created to block this bastard...
 
Old 11-22-03, 10:14 PM   #6
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92319
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92328

Only had time for 2...rest of time has been spent runnin around packin and now runnin out the door. Pz...sorry, subtract one vote
 
Old 11-24-03, 07:15 PM   #7
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hmmm very interesting pieces between both of you....its sad no one voted for you all...no worries i will do you good justice...

T-square i enjoyed your piece...kept your structure straight and your flow was good..couple parts i felt ruined the mood but overall decent piece...

Lethargic...i really enjoyed your piece thought it was forsure the winner..very much in depth and honestly you stayed on topic beautifully...

vote=lethargic...
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