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Old 10-18-08, 04:46 PM   #1
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Dear Mother,

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Dear Mother I love you with all my heart. you are The bestest Mother in the whole wide World// Im glad I have a Mother like you because you alwayz there by my side. I wanna just wanna say I love you mother. my mother is my everything. She is like role model to me. your heart close to my chest//


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Old 10-29-08, 10:54 AM   #2
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Hmm.. This really wasn't that bad. But you should try 2 show more expression. Like how and what u appreciate of the smal ittle things she does 4 u.. Or like use deep vocabulary 2 better experss your emotions and thankfulness towards her. Seems like ur just starting so its not that bad. Good luck.. Jst keep writting n ull improve..
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Old 11-02-08, 01:12 AM   #3
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yea, Thanks for telling me that
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Old 11-03-08, 01:24 PM   #4
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what are you 9 fucking years old?
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