sorry if this wack i aint wrote a poem in awhile....
im more of a battlin cat...but im try sumthin diff
hope u enjoy...





It's so sad that the future is a thing of the past//
but i brag, on how glad, i can see tomorrow//
i lost my closes freinds, but i still keep there sorrow//
i borrow, hope from sunny skies//
they provide, me with comfort of lasting bright tides//
i rise, from the lowest occasions in my life//
a exploding sight of knowing whats right//
and whats wrong, keep me alive, with my body left un-harm//
word is bond, how long will i feel fond, to these things of charm//
my arms, wrapp around money as if it was air itself//
once you rich, what the fuck is envy and wealth//
Death is the son of the dark black shadows//
enlighten minds know it as the 6th parrell//
life fill in a water barrow//
pouring hope, retracts oblivion, love support you wit hope of living//
souls different, but the same concepts, you the only thing thats missing from contacts//
to see, honesty n complex comments......blahhhhhh...yea

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Nie drop and felt the emotions in this piece fosho

like this part

my arms, wrapp around money as if it was air itself//
once you rich, what the fuck is envy and wealth//

^^^ so tru.................lol

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appreciate the feedback dun.....Uppin for more

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Excellent way of forming your stream of conciousness into words. Question, where these well formulated words of yours actually a message to inspire? As in the person, inspire?

~Shalom~

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Quote:

Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.