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10-25-06, 07:49 PM | #1 | |||||||
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>>My Letters<<
IP: 1A85 EE98
something I recorded but needs to be re-done.
I'm at best whenever I'm speakin my letters I was here before the earth, I been speakin forever// with these words, I'll give you the secrets of weather the flow is the unit....the beat is the measure// mathematical pleasure whenever I piece it together try to stay strong but u can't keep it together// come to me whenever you wanna see something better tha rhyme is timeless, I don't ever let my mind slip// the wisdom of a prophet - with the divine gifts the soul of a savior - the mind of a tyrant// the louder my word - the greater the silence i'll shatter you herbs - ya conversation is nonsense// I float on the rhythm, of mysticism there aint no such thing as contructive criticism// I suffer from the symptom, of cyicims the illest thoughts I express through my lyricism// |
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10-26-06, 11:15 AM | #2 | |||||
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IP: DE21 0090
I envy you Vokes, The first few Open Mics I put on this Site received some HARSH, Critizism. But it looks like your Gonna Start of with Some Positive Feed Back..Good Job, I liked it: It was in-depth.
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10-30-06, 03:58 AM | #3 | ||||||
why so serious!!??
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IP: 2020 96DE
im gon start wit the pros before the cons on this one
1st: ur flow was DOPE more better than half these textheads on here i could tell u did this to a beat u didnt just write some random shit down so major props to that cuz i was feeling that 2nd: ur rhyme scheme was more complex than average nuthin that really leaves u shocked but it aint kindegardon so props on that keep elevatin wit that shit man 3rd: now this wasnt anything saying anything really parts of it really didnt make much sense really i mean it did but it was real random and shit it was like u were putting shit together just cuz it rhymed so work on that a lil more other than that not bad better than some of these cats i'd give a 6.5/10 which aint too bad so keep elevating and RTF on my "hip hops resting place" holla
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10-30-06, 09:13 AM | #4 | |||||||
illmatic
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IP: 10D7 5181
I liked the flow, multis, and vocab. I couldnt catch the concept though. Good drop though.6/10
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11-02-06, 06:52 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 6D67 2A23
thatts some nice vocabb in yourr rhyme...and you made it work too so nice shitt
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11-02-06, 10:00 PM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: DA71 4663
pretty ghood homeboy....i like ur rhyme scheme and vocab usage....but next time try not to use the some words to end the line on text
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11-03-06, 11:28 AM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: 5D86 EFAF
like the vocab flow was def on point.....nice nice....i like how everything came together real smooth, nothin forced at all, i can def see this in audio since thats what it was intended for anyway....
good to see u still doin ya thang man holla |
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