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I'll vote.. Darkmanner..
You wrote in a stream of conciouness style.. and it was very good how you did it.. It reflected the thoughts of someone.. however it was a bit all over the place.. but then again thats the beauty of SOC as Falkner wrote.. Flight was more consistant but the verse was a bit boring.. Didn't really take it anywhere besides the guys thoughts..
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