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A Life Of Chryme
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The structure of this..made it seem well like an old type writer...cuz my head was going right....left like the typer writer does after each line....but the whole plot was nice...vocabulary wasnt too enhanced to the fact where u were puzzled but fit nice so everything was understandable and what not...i tihnk this was iight 6.5/10 keep it up bro
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