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Old 05-17-07, 03:09 PM   #31
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after one more vote, this is closed, unless it's for Lamp
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Old 05-17-07, 03:09 PM   #32
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after one more vote, this is closed, unless it's for Lamp
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Old 05-18-07, 07:41 AM   #33
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Brandon stop posting in here and fuckin vote already so we can try and set up new battles..

Edit: If this is not voted on by today then it will be a 3way title match with myself vs write vs mariah.
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Old 05-18-07, 07:41 AM   #34
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Brandon stop posting in here and fuckin vote already so we can try and set up new battles..

Edit: If this is not voted on by today then it will be a 3way title match with myself vs write vs mariah.
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Old 05-20-07, 11:27 PM   #35
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Ok then here's my vote...battles go up tomorrow guys...

Lampejo- Your shit was really mellow and straight forward, I really enjoyed it in it's entirety, the storyline just went nicely, BUT I felt it was too short and that the story ened abruptly.

Write- The poetic essence in this piece was layed out nicely, BUT I didn't like the storyline as much. as Lamp's. The emotion is always your strongpoint, as seen here, but I couldn't feel the styory, it seems like it's way overused bud.

v/Lamp for the more original story, in my opinion.
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Old 05-20-07, 11:27 PM   #36
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Ok then here's my vote...battles go up tomorrow guys...

Lampejo- Your shit was really mellow and straight forward, I really enjoyed it in it's entirety, the storyline just went nicely, BUT I felt it was too short and that the story ened abruptly.

Write- The poetic essence in this piece was layed out nicely, BUT I didn't like the storyline as much. as Lamp's. The emotion is always your strongpoint, as seen here, but I couldn't feel the styory, it seems like it's way overused bud.

v/Lamp for the more original story, in my opinion.
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Old 05-22-07, 12:46 PM   #37
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word thanks man..

3-way title match this week then...

and yeah i know my piece sucked i had to rush to get it done.
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Old 05-22-07, 12:46 PM   #38
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word thanks man..

3-way title match this week then...

and yeah i know my piece sucked i had to rush to get it done.
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Old 05-23-07, 01:23 AM   #39
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iight im cool with that now brandon and exact anfd lamp get to making new matches...im flying out this weekend and a tourny this week so .....
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Old 05-23-07, 02:30 AM   #41
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I am going to say this is dead Write....Exact ain't responding to my PM's...people never voted on this battle...it's safe to say goodbye I believe man.
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Old 05-23-07, 02:30 AM   #42
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I am going to say this is dead Write....Exact ain't responding to my PM's...people never voted on this battle...it's safe to say goodbye I believe man.
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