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08-30-03, 11:11 PM | #1 | ||||||
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i feel like spitt'n sumt'n tru......like da way i feel or sumt'n.......nawmwan?.....check it....
half puerto-rican half cuban..though my skin is light// couldn't find myself.....like a lil child lost at night,fill'd wit fright// gett'n shot or stabb'd...fo everyone is a nightmare// groups of three.. or nine peeps,cuz dawgz don't fight fair// sumtimes i wanna snap..go ahead call me a wanna b black// why can't whites rap..i've changed,tak'n no mo crap// parole and therapists?..dat ain't da life i chose// a gift from god..giv'n to me,to see if i wuz able to contain and hold// heard my grandmotha wuz dead..like da cold, i froze// all ova da place fist'n da walls..los'n control// but in peeps eyes..i wuz bruce willis,play'n my role// now i'ma b who i am..los'n track of myself, wuz neva plann'd// sumtimes, i wanna drown myself..like da dude in stan//(eminems song) i'm no longa a kid..still a son, but now known to b a man// a child who wuz lost..now has to turn his lif around,like a clock on da palm of his hand// but i ain't gunna do dat.. i'll leave it da way it is// can't jus let it pass..and act like it wuz plann'd to neva exist// now i'm goin on to high-school...try'n to cop hot outfits// i am myself,sergio cabrera..wit hot written all ova da couches// don't like me den FUQQ U..but u'll learn to like my $tyle// i'ma b me..even if i have to go back to bein dat lost child// |
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08-30-03, 11:44 PM | #2 | ||||||
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thats good i like it alot. some stuff didnt rhyme perfectly but im sure if u performed it it will sound good
to rate it 9/10 |
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