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08-12-03, 04:14 AM
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[Making The Band (round 3) - "Game Time"]
IP: 1636 8BC9
"Game Time" @ Soundclick
- http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...?ID=504045&q=Lo - http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...?ID=504045&q=Hi "Game Time" @ dMusic - http://lowdmowf.dmusic.com/music/stream/lofi/79864 - http://lowdmowf.dmusic.com/music/stream/hifi/79864 If you want the downloads, just hit the sites. Soundclick - http://www.soundclick.com/lowdmowf dMusic - http://lowdmowf.dmusic.com Drop some feedback and a link, and I'll hit you up when I check this thread. p.s. - Anyone telling me my audio still need improvement, if you can help me, that would be nice. I've tried everything I can think of, so throw me a bone peoples!! |
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08-12-03, 10:49 AM
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.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
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IP: 932A D079
Emotion, Delivery And All Is On Point Nice Man...Flowin Dope...Your Quality Is Top Shelf...The Only Real Thing I Could Say...Lyrics Are Good But Yeah Working On Your Lyrics Constantly Always Helps And Is Def A Top Thing To Elevate On..Yours Aint Bad At All But Thats The Only Thing You Can Really Work On Uh Coz Your Presence, Flow And All-Round Delivery Is Top Shit Mun...You Remind Me A Fair Bit Of Mad Skillz, Which Is A Fucken Good Thing!
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08-12-03, 01:36 PM
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IP: 6B69 4527
Ive seen this making the band a few times is this some kind of internet tournament or sumtin?
anyway yea nice flow and good lyrics. But to help u dog ive heard other peoples shit and this one would not win put up against it. 1. you need more emotion or some kind of feeling in what u say 2. I hate that little deep voice u used in some parts (my opinion) 3. contrary to what most believe u need a STRONG intro. The reason for this is because i need to know how to feel before i hear the song. and i need to feel your personality. To most people theyd say intro doesnt matter but ask any real artist they will tell you. Its not Always needed but for something of this nature it would be good to have one. 4. Put a little more wordplay/meta'a or sumtin in it. It was a good nice solid flow but i never really had to think. You want to say shit that makes people go DAMN. People love to hear wordplay/meta's/similes that they didnt think of. -Just trying to help out if u want to win this thing i guess. I dunno just some stuff i noticed but overall it was a good song. |
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08-13-03, 05:01 PM
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IP: C1DA C961
Yea, MTB is on another site. It's a good idea, but sometimes the rounds drag on too long. But, I'm not sure how I'm s'posed to pack similies/meta's into a song about beating death at a game. My topic didn't really leave me much room.
I don't have to win against people, I just have to make the cut from 15 down to whatever. I made the first 2 cuts no problem, and everyone I've heard is either evenly matched, or horribly behind. I know I'm not Audio Jesus, but I know I'm a good leg ahead of some of the kids in the competition. *shrugs* But, I'll keep your comments in mind, and see if anyone else offers the same kinda feedback. When something's repeated, it holds more weight. 'preicate the replies. Sidenote: I had an intro, but I felt it led people in the wrong direction, since I jus' had fun with this track. |
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