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Old 10-24-04, 09:37 PM   #1
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Triple_N 'vs' Premanition

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Old 10-25-04, 12:00 PM   #2
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Old 10-25-04, 06:47 PM   #3
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checkin in this...................................
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Old 10-28-04, 02:11 PM   #4
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*prem walks in, picks up the mic and proceeds to the final*


‘Master of punchlines?’, yet played wiv stretched lines…
wordplay like ya avatar, strange n wrecks rhymes…
wack at audio but doesn’t put on that husky voice…
wen sexually frustrated, ya balls don’t drop by choice…
you scoopin up a mobo cos ya audios sound like a tone…(1)
so many collaborations, think u had no mic at home…
they say attraction to another is shown by aggression…
so you and ‘tha Q’s beef is jus relationship progression…
‘kickin’ up a fuss only time u putting ‘holes’ in ‘souls’…(sole)
get the ball movin on your barz but it jus rolls n rolls…(stretch’d)
jus merkin this ‘dick’ to leave him with a dissed crotch…
constantly droppin ‘links’ like a skinny guys wrist watch…(2)
u got ya feet up in the lounge askin ‘whos your who?’…
well after reading the question bitch, my whos you…(3)
just spit to win, get the votes n progress to the nxt round…
ur style is so predictable…
…like ya sig don’t need to hear it cos we know how it sounds…

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(1) = look at the awards…
http://www.thesoundstation.org.uk/j...mobowinners.jsp

(2) = few examples…
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155794
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153450

(3) = http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157371
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Old 10-28-04, 09:43 PM   #5
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**Takes prem's mic then slaps him with it for ever putting his talentless greasy hands on it, then laughs as he cries running off like a little bitch**


Ya rap career's a shinkin' ship...mine's is cruisin' smoother than venician boats
I could throw a shit-covered horseshoe in the ocean an "U" still wouldn't float
Ya punches lack strength & personals are twists on played concepts at most
Ya lyrics are worthless like sleepin' security guards, always slackin' on post
U so desperately want to climb up RV's ladder by takin' off 1 of its top figgas
.....But your lyrics elevator is "broke" an stuck in the "basement" like tigga
U got no chance of winning...don't fight destiny, cuz ya verse is jus bickery
U could outline lyrics to track 2 on "no way out" & not see a trace of "victory"
I can only refer to ya audios like psychiatric patients->"they have gon wack"
Not wanted underground...like intoxicated foreman your a hazard to tracks
Every vet faced beat u..so understandably u tilting yaself 1 got me perplexed
Beaten in topical, audio, text..ya like widowed dogs, who's gonna own u next?
Always be nobody, cuz u could tape a battle between you and introspect
...........An even during the battle's re-runs you still wouldn't see "re-spect"
Your self-belief is "ludacris" & appaling cuz ya verses is "blown out ya ass"
...Every decent battle u was in ya verses "rec-tum" & left ya elevation "rash"
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Old 10-28-04, 09:54 PM   #6
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I only edited my verse because I forgot to put 1 line in it...hopefully I don't get DQed...much respect to Premantion...an goodluck to you.
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Old 10-28-04, 10:21 PM   #7
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Triple N easily....

His wordplay overdid every thing.
Pemmy had the personal's. But N had much better flow and punches.

Didn't think it was really close in my opinion.
Nice verse Triple.
Ok drop Premmy.

Vote= Triple N.
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Old 10-28-04, 10:26 PM   #8
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cmon kids, yall can do better than that.

prem- this is the best ive seen you drop but there was a certain aspect about it that seemed that you were forcing ya bars like WHOA, so in turn the punches werent that great.

Triple-smeh ive seen you drop better, i should vote against you for not tryin but thats not what this is all about. you had some punches that made me crack a little smile, even though i think youre starting to get streched. but because you had more "good" lines then prem by a little

v/triple n
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Old 10-29-04, 05:13 AM   #9
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o.k gud battle triple.........much respect.....

keep the votes comin y'all........

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Old 10-31-04, 07:23 PM   #10
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Triple_N Advances G'luck in the Final.
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