i couldn't sleep so i made this for you babe.

actually this isn't that bad. I like the overall look for it. Maybe not really feeling the colors as much. But yeah, looks good. nice job man

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its straight,but can i find a better pic of camron n send it to u n can u make it pink?

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I would definitely make the background smaller. Work with some different textures too like stocks, brushes, patterns. The text is okay. I would take the whtie stroke off though. Make the border a bit thicker as well.

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Yeah, I agree with everything above.
There's way too much open space, and the piece as a whole would benefit from being smaller. Text looks really random as well, I don't think it fits. You should add more grays if you want to use that picture of cam'ron, everything will blend a little bit better.

Hope that helps

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like what do you mean more grays man?

how bout make m a cover like you said??

I'm pretty sure he means to change the blue with gray and it will blend better. or at least make it a grayish blue.

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Right now as it is, the colors aren't really working. It's just too bland. I'd say you either need to add a whole lot more color, or just wipe the color out all together and go with a a black & white piece. If you choose the black & white piece though, make sure the contrast is high, otherwise it will still feel bland.

Also, if you're going to go in and do some revisions, definitely make it smaller. There's way too much empty space right now and making it smaller will only help close that space.

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it looks like you just made render with a background and put some garbage ass text read a tut