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03-01-09, 03:48 AM | #1 | ||
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this was good but it could be better.dont try to flow like rap so much.the purpose of poem if to able to write without guideline.certain line should be longer.try adding a few words to the shorter lines to touch it up.nice emotion here and vividness.overall good drop that just needs minor work.
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