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04-01-09, 05:24 PM | #1 | ||||
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One way 3-1-1 .vs bobericc lyrics 4-0
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04-01-09, 05:53 PM | #2 | |||||||
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04-01-09, 08:31 PM | #3 | |||||||
text.even geico can do it
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whats good what good
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04-01-09, 09:23 PM | #4 | |||||||
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You should be set on hiding your face to cover up your recent scars
You’re the only one who can post a 50 line verse with only 3 decent bars I’ll smack down your lame internet punch lines you been talking for years When I leave him e-wrecked, just know that it’s not my fault he’s a queer There is nothing hetero about the places you be sticking your dick in Bob in pussy is something that only happens when fishing with kittens This dude is weak, the ones who think he has a chance are clearly not stable If you were the star choice, your wouldn’t be at home watching basic cable I was hoping you would turn a new leaf, giving you lots of luck and hope But knowing this guy, it’s prolly already been chopped up and smoked No one really even likes or will spend quality time with this limited herb Cause If bob is hosting a weekender, it just means he finished his verse
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04-02-09, 05:04 PM | #5 | |||||||
text.even geico can do it
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OMG
the 1st person in this tourny to drop before me... man you deserve this, truelly.. huh? wtf NO! i aint talking about no prize...... 150 is what I aim after, because I'm tired of these fake rappers.. must be confused since the answer to you losing is 'way' backwords.. relax sir... cause all them concepts are cheesy you run with I believe in second chances.. ...........thats why you AND final should be in the jump bitch! how does a tie mean you both win? blamed it on non-reading faggots so hush hush when you magged it.. I almost forgot it even happened! only half of it.. a main arena aint what your gonna get me out of.. your verse is wack, shits more of a circus act than brittany's album your face i'm quickly pounding.. I'm bigger, i've been the best juicing your head, just cause you'll never see me, necta neck hahaaa i'm ending this... you should ask coke to come support ya couldn't be selling grams pimping on your mothers mothers corner |
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04-05-09, 01:32 PM | #6 | |||
Skadoosh!
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You should be set on hiding your face to cover up your recent scars
You’re the only one who can post a 50 line verse with only 3 decent bars ehh, this is a good idea but I personally feel as though coming from you its a little redundant because you quoted several of his bars citing them as decent, so... I’ll smack down your lame internet punch lines you been talking for years When I leave him e-wrecked, just know that it’s not my fault he’s a queer lol, the concept is played to fuck.. but I'd be lying if I said the e-wrecked/erect wordplay didn't make me giggle There is nothing hetero about the places you be sticking your dick in Bob in pussy is something that only happens when fishing with kittens ehh, I see where you was going but I don't feel as though the execution was good enough to make the punch hard This dude is weak, the ones who think he has a chance are clearly not stable If you were the star choice, your wouldn’t be at home watching basic cable again, this just lacks in the execution I was hoping you would turn a new leaf, giving you lots of luck and hope But knowing this guy, it’s prolly already been chopped up and smoked doesn't really come off as that great of an insult No one really even likes or will spend quality time with this limited herb Cause If bob is hosting a weekender, it just means he finished his verse lol, clever idea.. cud've done something a little more with it though VS. 150 is what I aim after, because I'm tired of these fake rappers.. must be confused since the answer to you losing is 'way' backwords.. ehh, this punch was reaching in my opinion... some might like it, but for me its too much of a stretch relax sir... cause all them concepts are cheesy you run with I believe in second chances.. ...........thats why you AND final should be in the jump bitch! another "in the jump" punch.. nah, its gotten old fast.. ya dig how does a tie mean you both win? blamed it on non-reading faggots so hush hush when you magged it.. I almost forgot it even happened! ehh, this was okish.. nothing special only half of it.. a main arena aint what your gonna get me out of.. your verse is wack, shits more of a circus act than brittany's album this was ok, execution could've been better but you did enough with it to make it a viable punch in my eyes.. standard wordplay, that sorta thing your face i'm quickly pounding.. I'm bigger, i've been the best juicing your head, just cause you'll never see me, necta neck reaching with the wordplay, punch was barely there hahaaa i'm ending this... you should ask coke to come support ya couldn't be selling grams pimping on your mothers mothers corner iunno, something about this made me laugh.. it had a street-style humor to it and I thought it worked. ONE WAY - I thought your verse was too inconsistent. You started with a good concept, but whether you disagree or not, I see it as being ineffectual. It's like a dude coming up to a guy and saying he's a raw beast at say basketball.. then the following week saying he sucks and has no talent. You sort of contradicted how you judged his verse against me. The erect wordplay was lolz.. I have to admit. You lose points on the gay concept, but gain points on being able to still make me laugh with it. The closer was good, I felt you could've done a bit more with it in all honesty. In the battle though, it helped you by allowing your verse to have a nice finish. In between is where you slipped. I felt some of the concepts, but you put in some really rushed execution to me and they just came off as below average hits. That bob in pussy line could've been a banger, but you slipped up I thought. Overall, not your best verse.. just a little too inconsistent for my liking. BOB LYRICS - Lmao, at first I thought that bit at the start was going to be a punch until I read it. Overall, I felt you started really weak but seemed to pick up your stride as you went on. The whole "way" backwards shit just seemed as though you crafted a concept, but you couldn't find a solid way of wording it and so settled on an average execution. You let yourself down with ANOTHER "in the jump" punch.. I mean, even to you they must be getting old now. The magged it shit was barely acceptable, I thought it lacked something, but at the same time it was readable.. if that makes any sense. You were also reaching with that necta neck shit, sometimes I feel as though you seem to have wordplay you are set on using, but you don't take enough time to craft the punch properly in a way that it hits with impact. The circus act had an old school vibe to it that I was digging, bringing back the styles of old and showing that they can still be effective. And that mothers mother shit had a street-vibe to it like I said. I could defo picture some hoodlum throwing that up in a street battle and getting a few "OOOHHHHHH'SSS!" from it, so good shit. Overall, some inconsistencies but all in all.. your verse comes off as more polished and it seems as though you were the more hungry of the two. VOTE: BOB LYRICS I felt like voting, so take it. I'm pretty much bored with this senseless back and forth shit. We all have our opinions, its whatever. |
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04-05-09, 07:14 PM | #7 | ||||
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You should be set on hiding your face to cover up your recent scars
You’re the only one who can post a 50 line verse with only 3 decent bars lmao, im feeling this +1 I’ll smack down your lame internet punch lines you been talking for years When I leave him e-wrecked, just know that it’s not my fault he’s a queer lol this had potential but I didnt feel it was hard enough There is nothing hetero about the places you be sticking your dick in Bob in pussy is something that only happens when fishing with kittens nah This dude is weak, the ones who think he has a chance are clearly not stable If you were the star choice, you wouldn’t be at home watching basic cable cool concept, not good wording I was hoping you would turn a new leaf, giving you lots of luck and hope But knowing this guy, it’s prolly already been chopped up and smoked lmao i'd quote this but dude, you smoke the bud that flowers, not he leaves... No one really even likes or will spend quality time with this limited herb Cause If bob is hosting a weekender, it just means he finished his verse this was ok but I can't quote it though vs. 150 is what I aim after, because I'm tired of these fake rappers.. must be confused since the answer to you losing is 'way' backwords.. nah not feeling this one relax sir... cause all them concepts are cheesy you run with I believe in second chances.. ...........thats why you AND final should be in the jump bitch! lol nah I aint feeling this it wasnt hard to me how does a tie mean you both win? blamed it on non-reading faggots so hush hush when you magged it.. I almost forgot it even happened! more like a statement then a punch only half of it.. a main arena aint what your gonna get me out of.. your verse is wack, shits more of a circus act than brittany's album cool +1 your face i'm quickly pounding.. I'm bigger, i've been the best juicing your head, just cause you'll never see me, necta neck nah too forced hahaaa i'm ending this... you should ask coke to come support ya couldn't be selling grams pimping on your mothers mothers corner [b]this shit is stupid but funny and I liked it +2[b] I feel like honestly, one way had better concepts to work with and coulda won, but he really needs to work on his wording, he needs to make a correlation within his set-up and his punch following the set up, along with wording the actual punch to be harder. Bob seems to be more seasoned regarding this aspect, and thats what makes me give him this. His shit despite having weaker and more played out concepts imo, was worded nicer, more swagg and emotion, a lil more comedic good battle to both though v/bob
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04-06-09, 07:18 PM | #8 | |||||||
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bob wins 2-0....
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