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03-23-09, 07:58 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Gimmick Battle: Coke Dealer vs Civil
IP: B158 C755
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When I be selling grams I’m slinging bombs like Uncle Sam Myspace It's ok to make money, Legit or illegal... But it's treason when you turn your back on your people. Last edited by one way : 03-26-09 at 12:32 PM. |
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03-24-09, 07:32 PM | #2 | ||||||||
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IP: C019 9845
Checkin .
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03-25-09, 08:18 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 8D7D 94CA
i'll key somethin up. i had a dope ass verse typed up
for LP too man. FUCK!
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03-27-09, 06:21 PM | #4 | ||||||||
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IP: C019 9845
My punches make em C IV, i'l make em feel weary
Cuz even a trans plant just makes this grown man a fairy Its quit obvious, he stays on-line, cuz in reality he always chokes Yeah civil literally handin out cash?? Just a cover on how he sways votes Kid claimin he's a thug and g...check his youtube, tha kids a dweeb Hes so fuckin dense even he can't finnnnd ooouutt how to runa league So stay tru to ur place Civil, u runnin all over the streets Only cuz i placed you there bitch....with my bat and feet N everyone should thank this dude, he's thinkin it through Avatar under his name, just a Caution of how bad his bars will do N Here's the dilema, i'd hand ya dope shit by i'd rather stall Cuz this whole league only vote's One Way, or not at all.
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03-27-09, 06:46 PM | #5 | ||||||||
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IP: C019 9845
u better fucking drop civil, cuz if you dont than i'm signin out of this league
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03-27-09, 08:58 PM | #6 | |||||
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IP: 8D7D 94CA
i know you think u raw dog, but rep to the def? is that true?
Apparantly, since you the only fucker on the whole site still reppin a crew U aign the best, you a fluke! "....on the daily" shiiiit, thats why u still in the hole Cuz honestly the only way i see coke ''destroyin tricks'' is with his cereal bowl I know ya'v heard it.... ...I eat pieces of shit like u for breakfast! u cant compete w/ me dog Kid started doin his own product, now look @ the bitch. HE AIGNT eatin @ all. I'll toss the street with one of YOUR balls... throw you around like trash son Cuz if thats the 3.5 u ratin on other peoples lines you needa go back to math 101 read what you wrote? i dont even like the feed in ya votes, Y hope 4 the win When coke just gon turn up his nose....or go back to smokin the stem You gon choke on that too kid, Quote:
Dog you gon be eliminated THIS WEEK, so how you gon sign out next week Go ahead be the dealer.....coke, and follow me to the next league
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03-27-09, 08:59 PM | #7 | ||||||||
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IP: C019 9845
rofl @ quoting my shit, isn't that feeding dude?
s'all good man vote up
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03-27-09, 09:23 PM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: B158 C755
My punches make em C IV, i'l make em feel weary
Cuz even a trans plant just makes this grown man a fairy na Its quit obvious, he stays on-line, cuz in reality he always chokes Yeah civil literally handin out cash?? Just a cover on how he sways votes lol, this was ok Kid claimin he's a thug and g...check his youtube, tha kids a dweeb Hes so fuckin dense even he can't finnnnd ooouutt how to runa league lol, I don't know wording is bad I don't think people are going to get this, I assume your making fun of his singing with his sig quote So stay tru to ur place Civil, u runnin all over the streets Only cuz i placed you there bitch....with my bat and feet ok worded bad N everyone should thank this dude, he's thinkin it through Avatar under his name, just a Caution of how bad his bars will do na, same concept as before N Here's the dilema, i'd hand ya dope shit by i'd rather stall Cuz this whole league only vote's One Way, or not at all. lol, not very hard though know you think u raw dog, but rep to the def? is that true? Apparantly, since you the only fucker on the whole site still reppin a crew lol, this was kinda dope worded bad but I got our general insult U aign the best, you a fluke! "....on the daily" shiiiit, thats why u still in the hole Cuz honestly the only way i see coke ''destroyin tricks'' is with his cereal bowl lol, not bad I know ya'v heard it.... ...I eat pieces of shit like u for breakfast! u cant compete w/ me dog Kid started doin his own product, now look @ the bitch. HE AIGNT eatin @ all. na, not a big punch I'll toss the street with one of YOUR balls... throw you around like trash son Cuz if thats the 3.5 u ratin on other peoples lines you needa go back to math 101 na read what you wrote? i dont even like the feed in ya votes, Y hope 4 the win When coke just gon turn up his nose....or go back to smokin the stem not really a punch Dog you gon be eliminated THIS WEEK, so how you gon sign out next week Go ahead be the dealer.....coke, and follow me to the next league not too hard again I got this pretty even, with better wording this could have been a really dope battle, both of you came personal, definitly not one sided votes should go both ways here but, Vote coke............. your last few lines sort of fell off civil you started dope.
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03-27-09, 09:23 PM | #9 | ||||
Jack The Ripper
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IP: F540 07B2
My punches make em C IV, i'l make em feel weary
Cuz even a trans plant just makes this grown man a fairy wordplay was kinda forced, needs better wording, but it was a good attempt Its quit obvious, he stays on-line, cuz in reality he always chokes Yeah civil literally handin out cash?? Just a cover on how he sways votes lol funny, could have been worded harder though Kid claimin he's a thug and g...check his youtube, tha kids a dweeb Hes so fuckin dense even he can't finnnnd ooouutt how to runa league LOL @ the youtube, this concept playing off his sig would be waaayyy harder with some better wording, but it was still decent So stay tru to ur place Civil, u runnin all over the streets Only cuz i placed you there bitch....with my bat and feet ok N everyone should thank this dude, he's thinkin it through Avatar under his name, just a Caution of how bad his bars will do decent flip on the avatar, not the greatest though N Here's the dilema, i'd hand ya dope shit by i'd rather stall Cuz this whole league only vote's One Way, or not at all. seen this nameplay dont before, but not the same way. This was ok vs. i know you think u raw dog, but rep to the def? is that true? Apparantly, since you the only fucker on the whole site still reppin a crew this was ok but the personal was forced since he aint reppin a crew right now, an the crew was a joke from the get-go U aign the best, you a fluke! "....on the daily" shiiiit, thats why u still in the hole Cuz honestly the only way i see coke ''destroyin tricks'' is with his cereal bowl lmao wtf? Funny but you shoulda worded this better to have something to do with eating, like call him fat or something like that iunno, it wasn't too hard to me I know ya'v heard it.... ...I eat pieces of shit like u for breakfast! u cant compete w/ me dog Kid started doin his own product, now look @ the bitch. HE AIGNT eatin @ all. wasn't really feeling this I'll toss the street with one of YOUR balls... throw you around like trash son Cuz if thats the 3.5 u ratin on other peoples lines you needa go back to math 101 rhyme scheme was strange here, and not the best punch read what you wrote? i dont even like the feed in ya votes, Y hope 4 the win When coke just gon turn up his nose....or go back to smokin the stem ok Dog you gon be eliminated THIS WEEK, so how you gon sign out next week Go ahead be the dealer.....coke, and follow me to the next league nah I think you both need to work on your wording and rhyme schemes, but overall this battle was kinda close and I enjoyed it, i'd have to say coke did better in this though, I felt he had better concepts and attempted harder punches, I really think with some better wording you guys can be wayy better, cuz a lot of those punches I was feeling like hmm, that's clever, this could be made into a hard as fuck punch if he worded it better. Take some time to think bout that and work on it overall cool battle, v/coke
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03-27-09, 09:24 PM | #10 | ||||||||
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IP: C019 9845
1-0 uppin
good battle civil
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03-27-09, 09:24 PM | #11 | ||||
Jack The Ripper
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IP: F540 07B2
lol @ oneway saying the better wording shit too
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03-27-09, 09:34 PM | #12 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: F23D 9CAD
My punches make em C IV, i'l make em feel weary
Cuz even a trans plant just makes this grown man a fairy na Its quit obvious, he stays on-line, cuz in reality he always chokes Yeah civil literally handin out cash?? Just a cover on how he sways votes this was coo Kid claimin he's a thug and g...check his youtube, tha kids a dweeb Hes so fuckin dense even he can't finnnnd ooouutt how to runa league lol... okay, i think you coulda worded it better too tho. So stay tru to ur place Civil, u runnin all over the streets Only cuz i placed you there bitch....with my bat and feet na N everyone should thank this dude, he's thinkin it through Avatar under his name, just a Caution of how bad his bars will do ehh N Here's the dilema, i'd hand ya dope shit by i'd rather stall Cuz this whole league only vote's One Way, or not at all. okay... points for being true. know you think u raw dog, but rep to the def? is that true? Apparantly, since you the only fucker on the whole site still reppin a crew ehh... this isnt true so i dont like it... the best crew still reps that shit. U aign the best, you a fluke! "....on the daily" shiiiit, thats why u still in the hole Cuz honestly the only way i see coke ''destroyin tricks'' is with his cereal bowl the connection was horrible but the punch was decent. I know ya'v heard it.... ...I eat pieces of shit like u for breakfast! u cant compete w/ me dog Kid started doin his own product, now look @ the bitch. HE AIGNT eatin @ all. na I'll toss the street with one of YOUR balls... throw you around like trash son Cuz if thats the 3.5 u ratin on other peoples lines you needa go back to math 101 na read what you wrote? i dont even like the feed in ya votes, Y hope 4 the win When coke just gon turn up his nose....or go back to smokin the stem na, this isnt true, he dont smoke crack... and this is basically a filler. Dog you gon be eliminated THIS WEEK, so how you gon sign out next week Go ahead be the dealer.....coke, and follow me to the next league wasnt feelin it. I think both of you need to work on connections and and wording... some of it is forced and this coulda been a lot better battle with some simple reconstruction. I vote for coke cuz he had a few better lines. Vote:Coke
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03-27-09, 10:12 PM | #13 | ||||||||
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3-0 uppin for votes
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03-30-09, 04:33 PM | #14 | ||||
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IP: 8D7D 94CA
coke wins
civil loses
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