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Old 12-11-06, 12:39 AM   #16
DaTrusHurtz
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Been here awhile, I've seen you drop hotshh!, it's true..
But just like the name, your text went along with it too.
this was okay, but wasn't really the hard hitter u needed for a dude like n. tav.. it was just a bit too simple for my liking

vs.

You boast what you got? Im roasting ya drops, provoking shots
That'll send Red n Auerbach without da coach or a clock
Red an Auerbach? That sounds pretty forced.. idea is aight, but don't feel like this punch really landed with this wording
My flows is hot, Im with your gale stoned she blow me w/ urgency
You with a gallstone......consists of doctor visits and surgery
nah this doesn't work...gall rhymes with all.. it doesn't sound like gal. I'd know, my girlfriend has gallstones and has to get surgery in a few weeks. Idea was creative, but given this pronunciation, this punch really doesn't work.

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Yo, show me what you know about flow and bout rhymes,
So I can throw down more multies...
......................................and sound whack all the time.
man, his shit was forced and didn't even sound right.. plus there's prolly a lotta disses u coulda made about gallstones n' shit.. i feel like you blew a really easy chance to feed here, this was too simple

Aight, I held off on voting on this before in case it was tied so I could be the tie-breaking vote. I can see why this is close. N. Tav came much more fresh than Red Bull, but his shit was kinda forced and ruined the effectiveness of his punches. Sadly, nothing was very good in this battle, but given the forcedness of his two bars, I gotta give this to Red Bull.

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Old 12-11-06, 12:40 AM   #17
DaTrusHurtz
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Red Bull WINS 6-1
N. Tavarez LOSES 5-2
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