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Old 12-25-06, 01:24 AM   #1
DaTrusHurtz
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4. N. Tavarez (7-2) vs. 8. PicturePerfect (6-3)

IP: F956 A220

Final 4 baby! You all have earned your way to this spot. Your so close to the finals, don't fuck up now!

Battler #1: N. Tavarez
Battler #2: PicturePerfect

Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET)

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Old 12-26-06, 12:09 PM   #2
N.Tavarez
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From: East Coast
IP: 55F1 3980

Scouting your next move.........I'll counter attack to wreck fools
and leave Perfect Plexed in a position Curt Hennig would pay respect too
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Old 12-28-06, 06:56 PM   #3
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its not hard blowin off ya lame punch.. but u still got me scared as fuck
cuz i can't even duck this battle when u hit me with gay names to look up
N.Tavarez didn't make the finals.. look, thats sum'n someone will have heard of G
cuz this semi's leavin ya face lookn worse than if truckers practiced plastic surgery
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Old 12-29-06, 09:43 AM   #4
N.Tavarez
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Big Picture
N.Tavarez didn't make the finals.. look, thats sum'n someone will have heard of G
cuz this semi's leavin ya face lookn worse than if truckers practiced plastic surgery



You beat Glocks but that aint a trey pound you squeezing
Dog your 'semi' doesnt kill.........Its the round you leaving
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Old 12-29-06, 10:12 AM   #5
N.Tavarez
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Curt Hennig was Mr. Perfect. btw
ready for votes yo
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Old 12-29-06, 03:19 PM   #6
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i was playin off semi as the round/truck, not the gun. btw... so umm weird
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Old 12-29-06, 07:08 PM   #7
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Scouting your next move.........I'll counter attack to wreck fools
and leave Perfect Plexed in a position Curt Hennig would pay respect too
Once again you had a nice use of multies for a decent flow and the concept was tight. I thought the nameplay was fresh which is a plus considering most nameplays are played on him by now. As a wrestling fan I fully understood the punch and it had a nice bit of wording and came off strong.
You beat Glocks but that aint a trey pound you squeezing
Dog your 'semi' doesnt kill.........Its the round you leaving
Decent feed, and a decent flip off him beating Glocks last week. The semi wordplay was used different in picture's bar, but you flipped it around for something else and dropped another decent line.

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its not hard blowin off ya lame punch.. but u still got me scared as fuck
cuz i can't even duck this battle when u hit me with gay names to look up
This wasn't really a decent feed. The punch was barely there and it comes off as more of a statement than a punch. It wasn't worded that well either, it was too simple and that only works if the punch is raw.
N.Tavarez didn't make the finals.. look, thats sum'n someone will have heard of G
cuz this semi's leavin ya face lookn worse than if truckers practiced plastic surgery
This was a decent flip using the semi final concept. It was worded nicely and came off strong. A lot better than your first bar because it flowed off the tongue nicely which makes it stronger.


Overall, this battle was alright. I thought that Nelson took it because he had two strong bars. Picture only had one bar, he had the opportunity to feed off Tav's bar but failed and dropped more of a statement punch. That is what this battle came down to. Two decent bars against one decent and one average bar.

VOTE: N.TAVAREZ

P.S. - Tav, you can now hit up my Fuck You All battle in the LBL cockhead. You can to picture, if you want. Word.
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Old 12-30-06, 01:32 AM   #8
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n.tav

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and leave Perfect Plexed in a position Curt Hennig would pay respect too

^^thats aight...good idea didn't like the punch tho



its not hard blowin off ya lame punch.. but u still got me scared as fuck
cuz i can't even duck this battle when u hit me with gay names to look up

^^lol this was funny i like the flip

N.Tavarez didn't make the finals.. look, thats sum'n someone will have heard of G
cuz this semi's leavin ya face lookn worse than if truckers practiced plastic surgery

^^word i felt this never seen a semi/plastic surgery flip

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You beat Glocks but that aint a trey pound you squeezing
Dog your 'semi' doesnt kill.........Its the round you leaving

^^better then the first...like the gun relation

umm close ass battle...i liked PP here tho...the first punch was a good feed and theother punches by both were a draw...good shit but

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Old 12-30-06, 11:25 PM   #9
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Scouting your next move.........I'll counter attack to wreck fools
and leave Perfect Plexed in a position Curt Hennig would pay respect too
nice nameplay.
You beat Glocks but that aint a trey pound you squeezing
Dog your 'semi' doesnt kill.........Its the round you leaving
ehh. to me this just reads like you misinterpreted his punch


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its not hard blowin off ya lame punch.. but u still got me scared as fuck
cuz i can't even duck this battle when u hit me with gay names to look up
this isn't that good. i think it would've been better if you'd set it up with "who the fuck is curt henning" or something but as is i'm not feelin
N.Tavarez didn't make the finals.. look, thats sum'n someone will have heard of G
cuz this semi's leavin ya face lookn worse than if truckers practiced plastic surgery
a bit stretched for my liking, but i haven't seen semi used in this way before so cool


i didn't feel either of the feeds. i've got n.taverez taking this because i felt his first punch was better than bp's. it wasn't stretched, and it was more personal in that it was a nameplay while bp's could've been used on anyone you battled in a semi final.


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Old 01-01-07, 09:19 PM   #10
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Scouting your next move.........I'll counter attack to wreck fools
and leave Perfect Plexed in a position Curt Hennig would pay respect too
^wow,I cant believe ppl. still remeber Mr. Perfect...good punch an really str8 to the point..
You beat Glocks but that aint a trey pound you squeezing
Dog your 'semi' doesnt kill.........Its the round you leaving
^pretty decent,Ive seen sumwhat of this concept before..but still u bout didnt..

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its not hard blowin off ya lame punch.. but u still got me scared as fuck
cuz i can't even duck this battle when u hit me with gay names to look up
^I get it,but not really effective to me..just was too bland..no hate tho'.

N.Tavarez didn't make the finals.. look, thats sum'n someone will have heard of G
cuz this semi's leavin ya face lookn worse than if truckers practiced plastic surgery
^Lol.pretty good...I liked it because it was corny funny.

overall/-Hotssh had more impact with his couplets..an P had the last bar,that made me laugh..pretty good battle,but Hotssh juss came in with better wording an the punches hit harder..I feel P's 1st punch really lack'd.thas it.

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Old 01-02-07, 05:52 PM   #11
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N.Tavarez

Scouting your next move.........I'll counter attack to wreck fools
and leave Perfect Plexed in a position Curt Hennig would pay respect too
------Hot flow, but as a punch it lacked. The concept was there but it just wasn't as hard-hitting as it could/should have been.

You beat Glocks but that aint a trey pound you squeezing
Dog your 'semi' doesnt kill.........Its the round you leaving
------Decent, better than your first. Everything ties in but lacks any large impact.

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PicturePerfect

its not hard blowin off ya lame punch.. but u still got me scared as fuck
cuz i can't even duck this battle when u hit me with gay names to look up
------The concept had a lot of potential but you just didn't use it. This is really bland.

N.Tavarez didn't make the finals.. look, thats sum'n someone will have heard of G
cuz this semi's leavin ya face lookn worse than if truckers practiced plastic surgery
------This is okay... Really goddamn corny and has that humourous aspect, but just doesn't hit as hard.



This was a pretty close battle. I dug PP's last punch but his first one just didn't do it for me. Overall, N. Tav was slightly more consistent and clinched this.

Vote: N.Tav
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Old 01-02-07, 11:10 PM   #12
DaTrusHurtz
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Scouting your next move.........I'll counter attack to wreck fools
and leave Perfect Plexed in a position Curt Hennig would pay respect too
I didn't know who Curt Hennig was until u explained this so that took a little away from the punch, but this is decent

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its not hard blowin off ya lame punch.. but u still got me scared as fuck
cuz i can't even duck this battle when u hit me with gay names to look up
the wording on this was really strange.. this punch just didn't land
N.Tavarez didn't make the finals.. look, thats sum'n someone will have heard of G
cuz this semi's leavin ya face lookn worse than if truckers practiced plastic surgery
concept here is fresh, but the punch comes off very statementish and not really harsh

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You beat Glocks but that aint a trey pound you squeezing
Dog your 'semi' doesnt kill.........Its the round you leaving
semi/round concept was a nice feed, hit harder than his punch

This battle wasn't as great as I hoped, but I got Tav winning this.

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Old 01-03-07, 12:56 AM   #13
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5-1

N. Tavarez WINS 8-2
PicturePerfect LOSES 6-4
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