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Old 12-20-05, 06:55 PM   #1
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Few Lines Dissin Mimesis

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Yeah, Just A Quick Spit, 'Cause I Know This Bitch Aint Gonna Battle Me, So YUP

My Names Teph Y'all


Does ItMake Me Racist..If I Promote black on white crime?
And If It Does...Lets Ask Mim Where I should Draw The Line...
He seems to be street smart, But never put a foot on the block..
Thinkin he know how we livin....Ever since he listend to Pac...
Non stop...Make his bitch ass drop...And greet me to glory...
Yeah you can speak for the whites, But only know half the story
A Black mans point of view is somthin you simply cannot relate-too
Dont get it twisted, you aint even important enough for me too hate-you
I think we made a brake-thru...and Mim finally accepts a call-out...
Then fails to check in.....so tell me, yo, whats it all about?
The remarks back 'n forth...Goin in circules like we're lost
And Mim aint about to give up...Until his salad is tossed..
I swear hes my stalker, Cant get enough of this slick talker..
Dude couldnt bring the force if he made love to luke skywalker
Always callin me whack, Wont take it back...even after he duck
an each verse, no matter if its rehearsed are lollipops
.................................................. ...cause they always suck
I buck n you run like fuck...and you go and head for the hills
Nah this aint beef Mim, I just lovin mockin you for the thrillz
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Old 12-20-05, 07:02 PM   #2
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I said I'll battle you after KORV. Now, I'll read this "diss."
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Old 12-20-05, 07:03 PM   #3
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So, out of the two punchlines that you had in their.. they were played. I'm glad you could put that together. It totally sucked, but whatever.
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Old 12-20-05, 07:07 PM   #4
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Seriously.. no. I ain't got no link to Mim but he would eat you the fuck up if this is your best. You used two styles in this verse which were played or shite. I mean.. wtf these lines are played & flipped BADLY:

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Originally Posted by MeTaFo'

And Mim aint about to give up...Until his salad is tossed..
I swear hes my stalker, Cant get enough of this slick talker..
Dude couldnt bring the force if he made love to luke skywalker
Always callin me whack, Wont take it back...even after he duck
an each verse, no matter if its rehearsed are lollipops
.................................................. ...cause they always suck


lollipops don't suck dood, they get sucked. You could of at least flipped that played line to make sense.

Similarly poo is the line about luke skywalker. You attempt to you wordplay but why would making love to L.S. 'bring the force', that is just gay stuff.
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Old 12-23-05, 01:10 PM   #5
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^^^Apo kold you are straight wack so go suck a dick......I really like this Diss track. Everything was on point. Had some nice personal and the wordplay you used i've seen you do better but it was decent at best. I thought the Luke Skywalker line was nice as hell even thought i do see it as kinda played though. But it's always nice bringin back some old shit if you make it nice. I give this Diss Track 7.5/10 Good job folk.


P.S. You can RTF by voting on my battle with apostrophe
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Old 12-23-05, 01:12 PM   #6
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DAMN, I dont even remember writing this shit.
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Old 12-28-05, 06:16 PM   #7
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^^^Apo kold you are straight wack so go suck a dick


You want to see me suck a dick? That's pretty gay.
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Old 12-28-05, 06:59 PM   #8
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This was weak, fuck white/black controversy...

...plus he has been telling everyone that he aint battling until after KORV.

This was a waste of a thread.
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Old 12-29-05, 05:47 AM   #9
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This was weak, fuck white/black controversy...

...plus he has been telling everyone that he aint battling until after KORV.

This was a waste of a thread.


i agree.....people wonder why racism still alive in sum parts of the us and world yet fail took at the little shit like this.....im white and yea yea i kno u people told me b4 dont say nigga....but like i mentioned in myaudio battle wit n.o.k. 2 hataz n dick ridaz of hataz......"im stay sayin nigga til oneof u muthafuckas kill me,wait a minute this shit the internet aint none of u doin shit 2 me"......for real though fuck all this white on white / black on black /
white on black / and black on white......cuz u kno wuts sad but true in every aspect.......a white man will look out for the next white man....but can n e of us honestly say the black man will?...im not bein racist im jus stating a point........aint none of us on rv or da undaground or rhyme kingz know each other 4 shit...so who are we 2 tell this person he fake or that person he lying?....feel me? oh merry belated christmas people...btw rtf on my diss 2 the rv hataz n dick ridaz peace
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Old 12-29-05, 05:50 AM   #10
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p.s. when he gonna battle u metafo? he jus opened 1 wit me.....?oh well....n honestly people talk about myessays n structure and stretched lines......his verse was terrible in those aspects.....lol....oh well...im bored n drunk so shoot me......
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Old 12-29-05, 07:14 AM   #11
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This was wack and NEEDS to be closed IMMEDIATLY!
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