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04-02-07, 09:09 PM | #3 | ||
don't try.
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Ya got a good base..now you just need to elevate from it. Be a little more original, flow was decent..maybe a little more wordplay and vocab, other than that nothin wrong with it. I'll keep an I out for more of your posts.
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