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Old 10-09-05, 02:23 AM   #16
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Old 10-09-05, 01:15 PM   #17
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hell yea, this shit's crazy
the intro i thought was gonna be wack but was actually kinda funny
flow was on point, the punch lines were hard but more like funny as hell
lolmao Two A's had me rofl
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Old 10-10-05, 08:44 AM   #18
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Beat:good
Flow:very dope
Rhyming:nice
Delivery:good...em-ish


Overall: I liked this...and yea...u are a white kid with pimples


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Old 10-10-05, 12:22 PM   #19
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^ LMAO......why thanks Q.....
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Old 10-12-05, 08:08 PM   #20
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ike beast track... hope u dont get sued and ish
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Old 10-12-05, 08:50 PM   #21
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alright i'm peepin it now......

ahhh shit lol this beats sick as fuck...that get in my car beat.....lovin it...lyrics weren't too bad.....ya flow was pretty hot......i was feeling the multies and rhyme scheme you had coming there.......nice overall......keep up the drops....
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Old 10-31-05, 09:45 AM   #22
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Intro is funny as hell...

Loving the beat as well, both your verses are on point without a doubt. You flowed nice, didn't hear you fell off actually. Got some funny lines in there, Trip's got a point though bout creativity but I feel like you had some original lines in there. Other were more played but they remain funny nonetheless. The hook is good for the song because it's catchy and it makes people get more into the song IMO. As people already said, the AA line was funny as hell without a doubt. Your overall presence on this shit is nice as well, you sound all relaxed yet arrogant, getting that attitude on huh haha

Overall solid and funny track you know, liking your voice too (feedback to learn rankings in RG)
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Old 10-31-05, 09:58 AM   #23
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yo WTF beat is this?...shit's hawt my wigga (lmao)...intro was aiight, 1st verse is pretty funny, lol...whole track is hawt dude...lyrically you got nyce ass techniQue, multies are always great from you...hook is craZy nyce, made me laugh lmao...

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Old 11-01-05, 12:11 AM   #24
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u seem like u try to come on a marshal mathers lp tip but delivery is ill flow is on point lyrics is ight styll could be uped a bit this is nice ish though nuting that i see can be improved that much except for the hook
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Old 11-06-05, 05:41 PM   #25
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beat i like this beat
intro was funny lol props on this didnt someone jsut copy this on one of their tracks????
flow was on point you have good multis throughout this
production pretty good no complaints really good mixing
voice i like ur voice its unique you remind me of eminem but you really dont iono lol weird hard to explain
verses were funny lol lmao at the double a line funny shit throughout lol at all the featured tracks getting slept on props liked ur new song
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Old 11-12-05, 12:14 PM   #26
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Owned.......

Double A line was fucking kljdsghiaghilrfht

You continue to impressssssss and shit. Im drunk at 11 in the morning on a saturday. How cool is that????????????????
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