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05-30-03, 01:45 PM | #40 | ||
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Damn, nice drop kid. .you have talent for sure, very emotional throughout this, took me on some what of a rollercoaster journey while reading it - deep emotional lines, very poetic description throughout trapped with passion and that shone through in this. Vocabulary could of been a touch higher and the bar length could perhaps be made shorter, but other than that i thought this was a good drop my man, although more poetry than open mic from my opinion, stay up!
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