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Old 03-16-07, 02:07 PM   #1
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5. Wireless (3-2) vs. 6. Ancel (2-1)

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G.B.A
Gimmick Battle Association


Prisoner Picture Battles

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Wireless

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Verses Due Monday at 12:00PM Pacific
10 Line Minimum, No Line Limit
Biting = Ban
Feeding = -2 Votes
Swaying = DQ
Must Vote On 4 Battles And Post Your Links
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Old 03-16-07, 02:18 PM   #2
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now what the hell . . .
go 10.
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Old 03-16-07, 03:55 PM   #3
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Old 03-17-07, 12:30 AM   #4
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Bitch you've never had control in your life, but a loss i'm sure you'll manage
'Cause in a battle if that was me verses you, all you could take is advantage
N' that's likely for duke, You cold? man i'd leave frostbite on this bitch
Puttin a bet on the way to jail those shackles are the closest to ice on ur wrists
Put a knife to this bitch, forreal you ain't nothin' but meat on the farm
& your used to gettin' photographed with men tossing you by the arms
Bro you've never been an idol, come to terms with it ya shit is just weak
'Cause when we talk me vs. W-Less, that shit's not a figure of speech
Your used to the backshots, men say your flowing through states
But with verses ass like that, who'd assume it was worth showing your face?


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Old 03-21-07, 02:19 AM   #5
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ull get out soon, come to one of my bashes
cuz i know yo stint aint longer than ya eyelashes
im gonna win dog, u cant stop it
this aint a hairy situation..yeah, so it IS your armpits
im the beset, u aint better than me bitch
not sayin u full of shit, juts that ur diaper is
needa get 0ut them bars? squezze through them now
with all those curls im sure ur hair could bail u out
ur too small dude, i just did u harm
cuz i put a line through you & im not talkin bout ur arms
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Old 03-21-07, 10:00 AM   #6
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WTF. definately one sided.

Ancel- better imagery, wordplay concepts. The whole 9. Punches were more direct, i think maybe 1 or 2 of your lines were worded badly. but other then that. straight verse. good job lil nig.

Wireless-dude, you wrote about a bunch of fake shit that didn't have anything to do with either picture. Neither one had hairy armpits. like wtf. your wording was simple, punches basic.

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Old 03-21-07, 07:11 PM   #7
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iite...ancel gets this one...just a stronger verse....wireless your verse had hella potential but everything was either werded weird or wasnt relevant or strong enough...keep elevating tho

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Old 03-21-07, 09:43 PM   #8
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Blah, I don't know which way to go with this one. The only punch I liked was from Ancel with:

Bro you've never been an idol, come to terms with it ya shit is just weak
'Cause when we talk me vs. W-Less, that shit's not a figure of speech

but it wasn't even about the pic or anything in relation. The rest of Ancel's verse was a lot of stuff that didn't really hit or was badly worded. Wireless on the other hand stuck well to the topic and had good concepts, but used them and worded them horribly. I guess if I'd have to vote, I would go with Ancel for that one punch.

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Old 03-22-07, 01:58 PM   #9
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mehh, ancel had the w-less line and the opener. wireless had a keyed verse. so i have to give the battle to the person who put more effort and thought more clearly about the punches they were going to use, i know heychoo got some skills and he'll get up there as soon as he stops keying verses we all decide to skim over.

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Old 03-22-07, 05:41 PM   #10
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Bro you've never been an idol, come to terms with it ya shit is just weak
'Cause when we talk me vs. W-Less, that shit's not a figure of speech
^ that pretty much wins it, but I didnt see much else that could stick out.

wireless, try you homo.. u can do better than that.

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Old 03-23-07, 11:23 AM   #11
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Ancel wins 5-0

Ancel WINS 3-1
Wireless LOSES 3-3
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