Topic: Avalon
Verses Due: Jan 9
Voting Ends: Jan 12

sweetness... i'm ranked 5th...woo hoo

i expect this to be a good 1

g'luck wall

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The soles of my shoes vanished for so long i've traveled on
I finally seek the my destination...Home Sweet Avalon

Daily routines of prize and much glory
An elder speakin of life n' such stories
Speaking wisdom among young youth
Virgin ears peep the words containing truth
Days pertain love and no signs of strain
A wealthy body who's lost the name of pain
Only endurin' the insurrance of home
& an often occurance of praising songs
Rags to riches, How i ever came to this
As i look back at the journey..I reminice...

The Journey
Climbing rocks and barriors while barefoot
Consuming insects I've capture & squooshed
Pushing forth my destination far ahead
With my mind figuring i'm closing in on death
Courage kept me strong, Gave myself hope
Heavenly scenes i visioned...Wished to provoke
Followed the road...The path was trecherous
Misleading intersections i succeeded using a compas
In the distance trumpets reigned thru the surroundings
Conquored demise, Now relsihing my founding...

The soles of my shoes vanished for so long i've traveled on
I finally seek the my destination...Home Sweet Avalon

^ o and minues the "the" in the italic part

should be


I finally seek my destination...... and then the rest...
but i can't edit it