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12-31-03, 01:45 AM | #1 | |||
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[WK9] 25 AngellicalR (0-0) 26 Token (0-0)
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Topic: Night Shade
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12-31-03, 04:25 PM | #2 | |||||||
Just call me your Savior
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IP: BB8C D4B2
checky check
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01-01-04, 12:07 AM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 6FFB C649
Mic Check, Please
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01-05-04, 09:29 PM | #4 | |||||||
Just call me your Savior
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IP: BB8C D4B2
Tha Dark ways of Death...
In Glory or Not... Murder Tonight's tha night Imma wear a cloak n hold a dagger... I need not fight... He needs to finally know his maker... Face to face cause he went n took wat he cannot replace... Why'd he break a man's fragile life in tha first place?... She was my love and he was supposed to be the first... Now he died by a slug and she holds no more birth... Both in tha dirt... Why I gotta bury my family?... Each shovel chink i heard drove me deeper into insanity... The pitch is black and I can't seem to see who I attack... But my mind's eye sees him n i know tha knife finds his back... I hear a scream of pain... Tha blood is washed away by rain... Heaven's tears fall cause tha game sent anotha to an early grave... I hear shouts of his friends and guns cocked in tha darkness... I swear it to all of them: I won't run... Put your shots in tha heartless... I close my eyes to recieve my demise... And as I fall... Tha angel's will continue to cry... Drugs Tha drugs turned to liquid and syringed into a needle... To her... Drugs were legal and pain was all tha evil... So she shot up to whisk away all of life's pain... Uneducated and didn't know each hole destroyed tha brain... She only knew wat was good and wanted more... She didn't know was was happenin when she hit tha floor... All she heard was sirens and shouts and cryin... And her mother and brother askin: "Is she dyin?"... An out-of-body experience that will last eternal... And when Judgement came she was casted in inferno... Heat was just too great and she surely did suffer... Battle of wits between herself and drugs and tha drugs were tougher... She even met tha devil in tha center of hell n conversed... He told her to revel at tha fact she's not tha only victim of tha curse... That has plaqued mankind since tha beginning in tha garden... and this problem is wat everybody has... And it's only startin... So she walked away to face her punishment and saw him... Tha druglord and provider... Hell's smoke in his face n coughin... just to say: "That's Fate!"... Suicide He always dreamed of tha gun blasts n of all tha fun laughs... each aimed at him during lunch... People callin him "dumbass"... He could barely hear himself think over all tha memories... 13 and goin through depression already... Cause of enemies... That he has at school... Only wanted to fit in n be cool... But all tha jocks pushed him n made him look like a fool... He tripped and stumbled and barely stopped on tha edge... Until tha school bully purposely threw a ball at his head... And everyone made fun of him so he ran to tha hall n cried... Then remembered about his locker... Where he kept his knife... Thought about stabbin that fucker in his gut... BUT!... Turned around... "Life really sucks anywayz, plus: Who would give a fuck?"... Locked himself in a classroom that was empty and just cussed... As loud as he could... Tha teacher next door came over: But he was already cut... As tha students looked in horror through tha window at all tha blood... Little Amy ran to tha bathroom to hang herself... He was her crush... Remorse If you've witnessed children or women as victims... Then don't be forgettin to listen to this wisdom... Just let them have tha life that they can make... And leave it up to fate to let Death decide and provide: The Night Shade... Curtain
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01-05-04, 09:36 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: BB8C D4B2
*Edited to:*
fix some MAJOR spellin mistakes n formatting ***********
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01-10-04, 01:54 PM | #6 | |||||||
Just call me your Savior
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IP: E312 8895
no-show???
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01-10-04, 02:50 PM | #7 | |||
Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
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IP: 60C1 18B5
AngellicalR wins
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