^Yes because it's been my life dream to have pnemonia boy reppin' an area code three hours away from him come and vote on my battle, you can see right through me, it's true...


you're all herbs, i don't know what's goin' on anymore

I'll just battle you all and shut you up, but for now i need to rest and stuff

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Later DanE
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hmm...good battle.....close.....let's see...
Dope: structure was very good....metas were average.....wordplay too....
punches were ehh....wasnt really feelin too many of them.... work on combinin ur punches and personals, u attempted a few....good multies...you should keep your verse all together..no spaces between bars.....overall not a bad verse at all....i'd say 12/20 punches need to get better...

Venom: also very good strcuture....liked your punches...definitley better....more direct....made me laugh....no multies really....good attempts at personals....wordplay good....meats nice....overall good verse...i'd say 14/20 .....

good battle dope you just gotta elevate your punches...potential have you...
venom good battle use multies sometimes there fun....
vote-venom

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I vote Venom
He had a gud flow cuz he had better rhymes than Dope
Venom also had a lot more punchlines an dthey were quite good
He also had a better struture than Dope so my vote goes out to Venom

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

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Wathup Bitches ready for my spit

Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)

upping............................................ ...

Yeah...this is becoming a pathetic thread..with all the freeposting..any way...
Dope Name..you had a clean structure...easy flow..and some good punches...nothing too extraodinary though...
Venom...your strucure was also good..you had a more complex technique to your drop and you had some decent punches...nothing special either though...

Meta's- Venom..you had the witty meta's..the harvey line..the two dollar bill thing..good.
Wordplay-Dope Name..you had a lot of good multi's infused with good word usage that made a "ring" to your flow...
Punches-Venom..you had punchlines that made you think..while dope name was to the point..I prefer Venom's wit.
Sust-Dope Name..You had a more complete verse with really no filler..just a few weak punches..
Structure-Tie...you had different styles but both were easy to read...
overall...Dope Name...Venom was cool but Dope Name came consistent and had ne filler

Shit.....................sorry I meant to paste it in my last post.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112093

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