uppin for votes x2 please vote if ya view this it is an important battle so please vote on this battle please

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<a href="http://http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=1194274">Se7eN v.s Long Beach Finest</a>

uppin x3 please vote on this people...................VOTE< VOTE< VOTE, PLEASE VOTE

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<a href="http://http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=1194274">Se7eN v.s Long Beach Finest</a>

This battle was weak. Both need elevation.

I see more potential in TheUnderRated, however.

First off.. There was no witty punches in this battle and all punches were soft and wack. We were all new at once so don't feel bad. Just keep reading veteran battles. Overall I give this to TheUnderRated because he had a few good concepts in there with maybe 1 or 2 decent bars. While Se7en had 1 or 2 concepts followed by wack punches. Therefore

Vote- The Under Rated

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Alot wittier by Underrated fo sho...

Wordplay was in effect and while it wasn't KO hard...

It was Ali jab like...

Always in his face.

7 did aight...

Woulda worked against a newb...

Cuz that opener was funny, but come on...how old is that?

Same thing with Janet, kinda played out already.

Some shit made no sense..."drove/curve". I know, but still...

The "dildo/strapped" line is played to death too.

It's shit like that that got ya beat, man...

Peace

Winner: Underrated

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yo underrated won thgis battle, seven it was good but not good enuf, thgoughg it was wack at first i cna't complain i like multi's






vote: under rated

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dun be mad cuz u lost, your just another victimLyod banks
"lyod banks motha fucka, with a gun and a clip/
ready to smack up all those nigga's that running there lip"

thanx for the honest votes guys I know I came wack in this verse, I'll elevate on my punches and uppin' x4 to get this closed........PLEASE VOTE PEOPLE

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<a href="http://http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=1194274">Se7eN v.s Long Beach Finest</a>

word i'll up this i think this is either my third or my fourth not sure lets close this thread though guys so that we can keep movin on with life thanx pz....

Se7en
I’ll pop this, till under rated drops, like a single that’s hot
This guys as fake as when Bill Clinton claimed he never smoked pot
-multi,metiphore,metiphore = 3
On top??? your not even close, you never traveled the road
IJL??????? so his crew gets boners when he says................I jizz Loads
personal,metiphore,wordplay = 6
Personal’s affect him like a test, a bitch like him wit a small chest
Would make his skills and rhymes temporary like Janet exposing her breast
multi,-metiphore,metiphore,-played = 4
I’m in it, your out, get a clue to your brain and then you can send it
Wat takes you hours and hours, only takes my ass fifteen minutes
-confusion,-flo,-fake personal = 0
100 percent of this verse, would make this guy turn into a super herb
He’s so dumb, they told him to drive straight, but he drove against a curve
-self punch,-metiphore = 0
Crew battles are easy and simple, your career wit them are popped like pimples
Native Americans got scared when they saw you rhyme and use symbols
-flo,-repeated punch,-confusion = 0
Limbo, to ripple down your back, he’s a pick-up in a real life game of jacks
This guy wears a dildo belt, so he rides through the hood and claims he’s strapped
multi,-confusion,wordplay = 4
A gat is a weapon, along wit this guy’s mom and the played rhymes he’s stressin’
At home on a couch, jerking off to gay models, is the only location this guy’s reppin’
-punch,punch,-played = 2
Testin’ and messin’ my tatics, I use on people like him that are faggots
I shot this guy in his ego, so this verse was juss a little target practice
-vocab,multi,-confusion,wordplay = 3

Not too good.I was expecting better. More or less alot of nothing in this verse. Basicly alot of words, that was it. You need to re-word things up a bit. Alot of confusion. Work on that.
Overall = 22
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TheUnderRated
kids militant a Major herb now watch me light this spliff....
Then like lemmings lead your whack crew.....directly off the cliff...
vocab?,multi,metiphore = 6
I could kick played lines "you couldn't spit ill if you were sick"..
and still win cause se7en spits more whack rhymes..... then all of soundclick....
filler,metiphore = 5
Check it I'll try to sum up your crew by adding these simple words...
~Yo What uP~checked the Limited Edition of Killer MC....said y'all was herbs...
personal,punch = 7
bout to Code-187, Se7en, Tilleyedie, plz be my guest of Honor....
Cause of the Kanserous sonage by my Fatal Lyrikzz....nicknamed RB.com's father...
-continued personal = 6
Look I already arrested your crew put em behing bars...^^^^
But don't worry i'm topical so i'll help heal their battle scars....
wordplay,-confusion = 4
Heres your chance.......forfeit........nah he stupid for that.....
Punches swing to him he getting more hits than Burt Backerat....
metiphore = 6
I could draw straight lines for two bars-------------but thats no fun...
Tonight I'm reaching a new level of speed i call it merk 1 (ahahha)....
metiphore, -corny = 4
Hey se7en walk a mile in the shoes of a true rap head.....
go ahead i got a new brand name for you i called em Mer-Keds.....(ahhah)
-corny = 3

Hope you seriously didn't think your 2 closing bar's were funny. However, Anyways, Besides the weak finish this was an OK verse, not bad at all. You should just work on finishing with a little more punch and wit besides Ked's shoes and Mach 1. OK tho.
Overall = 41
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Vote = TheUnderRated

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