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Old 05-03-04, 10:50 AM   #1
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vango vs. lock

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deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.
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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league
 
Old 05-03-04, 03:27 PM   #2
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checkin in
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Old 05-04-04, 06:34 PM   #3
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Check Round 2
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Old 05-04-04, 06:34 PM   #4
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Old 05-06-04, 04:59 PM   #5
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lock are you gonna show for round 2 or what?
 
Old 05-06-04, 07:19 PM   #6
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alright let me get this over.

First of all Lock, theyre aint no way you could win, even if you broke both my arms
and took away my pen

Even if you unplugged my computer and deleted my hard drive, we could move this battle to Saturday night, and your lyrics still wouldnt be LIVE!

You couldnt beat me if you pm'ed your crew and all the cats that hate me,
called all your dickriding buddies and your ex girls that want to date me

You still wouldnt have enough votes to be in contention
How ya reppin CRhyme Syndricate when your "Locked" in juvenile detention

See there aint no need to break ya, when i got the Master Key
Your best bet, NO SHOW, avoid the catastrophe!

You heard of Mc's bringin the heat, well i bring the Five alarm fire,
after you crew hears you spit, theyll probably ask you to retire

Simply stated you forgot to bring a paddle and your up Shit Creek
Plus you give new definition to Dirtyboys FLow of the "WEAK"
 
Old 05-06-04, 10:45 PM   #7
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I came into rap battles with nothin to lose/
Im goin out the president , while u got to choose who/
This aint no game just because im on a higher level than u/
But still u couldnt catch up even if u skipped them by twos/
This niggas ready to die wit the joystick in his hands/
Dogs a trip, like flip, cause its a gameover van/
Ths boy is weak, but everyone please give him a hand/
You aint gonna get noticed until u barried next to ya fam/
cause im leavin cats in columns binded like little kids whos sniper shooters/
makin ya chest expand like u was workin at hooters/
stickin ya head in a freezer, makin u wine and it aint coolers/
you couldnt measure to me even if u had rulers/
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Old 05-07-04, 07:44 AM   #8
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im givin this 1 2 vango!!
he had the stronger punchlines and was more creative!
though it was still a weak battle!
LOCK you've produced alot better than this previously,remember!!
your only as good as your last thread

good luck 2 both of u, oh, and return the vote on my battle
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Old 05-07-04, 12:10 PM   #9
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You still wouldnt have enough votes to be in contention
How ya reppin CRhyme Syndricate when your "Locked" in juvenile detention

See there aint no need to break ya, when i got the Master Key
Your best bet, NO SHOW, avoid the catastrophe!

You heard of Mc's bringin the heat, well i bring the Five alarm fire,
after you crew hears you spit, theyll probably ask you to retire

Simply stated you forgot to bring a paddle and your up Shit Creek
Plus you give new definition to Dirtyboys FLow of the "WEAK"

8/10
hott shit dog, you ripped him
nice spit... thats wot i expected good job

cause im leavin cats in columns binded like little kids whos sniper shooters/
makin ya chest expand like u was workin at hooters/
stickin ya head in a freezer, makin u wine and it aint coolers/
you couldnt measure to me even if u had rulers/

ok ish but could have been better, good start thought u jus need to build on ya meta's and punches n personal

v/ vango

hit up the championship match yo
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Old 05-07-04, 10:40 PM   #10
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v/Vango for a better verse
better punches
although both verses was wack
Vango's was less wack
Vango you need to work on makin your verse entertaining
I didnt like the style of how you set up your verse
and the flow wasnt all that great to me

Lock..lol..you just sucked
your verse was kiddie
elementry
nothing impressed me OR surprised me
keep elevatin

v/Vango
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Old 05-08-04, 11:54 PM   #11
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vango - damn u started off slow.....but kicked it up toward the end....hot shit the last few bars....feelin it....sum were fillers....sum were hot punches....good wordplay....nice flow...u kicked it in toward the end which helped alot....overall good spit....

Verse Score - 7/10

Lock - wtf was that....u maybe ahd one or two punches....wow....u jus said gay shit...werk on usin betta andmore meta's.....use sum personals!!.....get direct punches....flow was fine....wordplay was decent....but u need them punches....

Verse Score - 4/10

Vote - VanGo
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Old 05-09-04, 09:09 PM   #12
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4-0 vango wins
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