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05-14-04, 12:05 AM | #16 | |||||
retired.
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
^ no. i dont do tag anymore... didn't like it all that much first time.
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05-14-04, 12:54 PM | #17 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 4AD5 D18A
Shadow came with a lot more punches that actually hit. VC didn't really have that many punches at all. He seemed to try and glorify himself more than put down his opponent. I think that is where he lost....
Vote - Shadow
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05-14-04, 09:09 PM | #18 | |||
New to RB
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IP: FA38 D70D
v/shadows edge because it sucked much less
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05-14-04, 10:49 PM | #19 | |||||||
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IP: 4289 77F4
This battle was real tight even though VC you could have worded your stuff better bro I mean i felt where you was going wit it but just could've been better
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05-16-04, 10:05 AM | #20 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
breakdown for shadow's edge:
flow:nice job nothing too complex i'd of liked to see more internal rhyming though 7/10 volcabretty good nothing too amazing though 7/10 punches:some nice lines for the msot part real personal best line i thought,"If you’re so fucking hot, why nobody read what you wrote?Face the facts: YOUR LAST BATTLE ONLY GOT ONE FUCKING VOTE!" nice job 7/10 overall:21/30 breakdown for VC: flow:wasn't quite working on the same level as shadow your lines were streched out a bit in spots and wasn't really any internal rhyming to help it 6/10 volcab:good job no problems here 7/10 punches:a couple of nice lines the big problem was the amount of them there wasn't alot of concrete lines directed right for shadow best line,"I stay in the light,just outta the *Shadows Edge*/" nice name flip 6/10 overall:19/30 vote--good battle one of the better ones of the week but my vote is for shadow's edge
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05-16-04, 03:30 PM | #21 | ||||||
swift chancellor
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IP: 30DF E491
Vote goes to Shadow's Edge
Why? Much better punches without the gay n00b structure (all the // and whatnot)...easy battle to call. Basically, Shadow was direct and VC...well, i had no idea what he was trying to say...or why he thought it mattered and could belittle his opponent.
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05-16-04, 08:48 PM | #22 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
5-0 shadow's edge wins
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