deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
forced words must be bolded or something so people can
see them
bar limits:
16 bar min.
32 bar max.

forced words you must use these in your battle verse or
be d'q: nature, intersection, ability, process

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

Lol.

Czech.

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checkin in

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

illtalic where are you come and out play. lol

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

Alright bitch, this is how its done

First of all am I battlin Illtalic or Casual, cuz aint nobody heard of ya,
How bout I call you John Doe Rapper, straight up after I murder ya

How you expect to beat me if you cant even choose a name?
How you expect to be a player when you dont understand the game?

See you lack the "ability" to test my mental agility, your a janitor in this rap game
WHILE I OWN THE FACILITY

IF this rap game was a race I'd leave you spinnin wheels at the "intersection"
How come you the only cat on RB with a bodyguard for PROTECTION!!

Cuz Illtalic your like cement, all mixed up and takes forever to come hard
I asked this cat for some weed, and HE STARTED WORKING IN THE YARD!

Illtalic Its not in my "nature" to hate ya, but I gotta tell ya I think your styles played
Not to mention I burnt your school down, just so you could get out of the third grade

Thru this "process" of elimination Im seperating the strong from the weak,
Your like Memphis from the Roc, cuz your futures looking BLEEK

See im bringin more HEAT, than Dewayne Wade against the Pacers,
after seeing Illtalic spit, I wish Rap battles had more erasers

But it could never be that easy to simply eliminate your verse
You could prewrite your shit for days, and ill still kill you unrehearsed

Your like the definition of PAUSE, simply put Vango defines REWIND
Nobody would even FEEL Ya, even if you were lost in the school for THE BLIND

And I dont usually do gay jokes, but Ill call a fag a fag
I heard you offered Shadows Edge a blowjob if he put your name up in the MAG

I was reading your AVatar the other day and it said BANG BANG YOUR DEAD
But before you start to bustin, you better make sure your full of lead

Cuz Illtalic's just a butter knife, while Im steady choppin heads, you got as much chance of beating me as TONY SOPRANO JOINING THE FEDS

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

Vango`s gotta go.. the kid doesn`t have a chance in hell
Cos this fag`s quickly disposed.. like antique`s in garage sales
You put ya neck on the line with those stretched lines
Killed ya own rep.. an let me outshine ya verse with mine
I`m walkin` ability.. you can`t touch it.. or me for that fact
Ya wack.. i`ll applaud you out.. nice try but ya gettin` clapped
An we aint talkin` ovation.. Van`s confused.. so i pass him by
Have him cut down before he starts.. inter sections.. like bye-bye
Oh my.. looks like you was dealt a bad hand.. so i ace this
An throw fists.. while you throw in more towels than room service
I`m strippin` any credibility.. have ya wackness laid bare an taught
That this pussy`s exposed.. like a Female Only Nature Resort
The League`s mine.. you`re a steppin` stone in the right direction
Van`s goin` an gone.. i`m winnin`.. by a process of elimination.

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breakdown for vango:

flow:it worked better in some spots then others but overall good job 7/10

volcab:not that good pretty basic things here not what i expect from you 5/10

punches:some alright punches good use of the words in them too best line,"See you lack the "ability" to test my mental agility, your a janitor in this rap game
WHILE I OWN THE FACILITY" if you could of done your whole verse like that you could of gotten better score in my eyes 7/10

overall:19/30

breakdown for illtalic:

flowretty straight forward no complexity to your structure but it worked i cause 6/10

volcab:i'm giving you more then vango cause you atleast weren't rhyming lines with the same words but still could be better 6/10

punches:not much here you lacked alot of lines some alright ones though like,"Cos this fag`s quickly disposed.. like antique`s in garage sales" 6/10


overall:18/30

vote--vango gets my vote

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

Yo this cat didnt even spit on time.

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

See you lack the "ability" to test my mental agility, your a janitor in this rap game
WHILE I OWN THE FACILITY
See im bringin more HEAT, than Dewayne Wade against the Pacers,
after seeing Illtalic spit, I wish Rap battles had more erasers

some nice solid punches and personals from vango

71/10

I`m strippin` any credibility.. have ya wackness laid bare an taught
That this pussy`s exposed.. like a Female Only Nature Resort
The League`s mine.. you`re a steppin` stone in the right direction
Van`s goin` an gone.. i`m winnin`.. by a process of elimination.

some hot shit there son, awsome flow but didnt contain as many personals as vango
hot shit tho

69/100

v/vango

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