uppin'

uppin

Aight, hit up my battle for me. Thanks

Naw, i thought Lyrical Method had this one easy. He came out hard and I liked his punches. Aiiight, you did good, I just thought that Lyrical had you beat.

why the fuck you boastin, cuz i can serve your ass without even postin
^^BEST LINE^^

This one goes to Lyrical Method

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mann ez aiight had better everythang,better raps,better flow,and better structure and more sense.

so my V=aiight

yeah, and Im uppin this shit again like its mine.... holla

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I thought this battle was kinda close but Aillight had the edge on this one.... v/Ailight

Lyrical Method...I don't know if all your battles are structures like this but I could imagine it will effect your votes if they are. My advice to anyone who writes numbers at the end of each line or bar is STOP. The reason is, if you are numbering the lines usually one of 2 things are happening...either your structure is making your flow hard to follow so you have to "instruct" everyone on where the line ends....or the other case is the lines are to long or stretched..

I think Aillight had a couple decent punches..





This was decent, especially the footlocker line, even though I would have changed "havin" to "doin"

Both of yall had some lines that didn't make sense or didn't rhyme

LM
Ail this didn't rhyme

and the last thing..USE MORE PERSONALS....

stay up yall peace

3rd battle 2day so i'mma challenge a vet//
rip 2 shreds n then i'll seperate em like a marriage that's stressed//

^^ that's weak

u heard I wanted 2 battle n u got quite frightened//
cause I'll expose u as a fag who hit more men than Mike Tyson//(hit-slept with)

^^ lol...if u really have to explained your punch in this line, it's a weak punch to begin with...hit? are u serious


I have 2 2 show emcees that I master flows with ease//
plus I'm the sickest, U just a pussy with a vaginal disease//

^^ ur talking about urself more than dissing your opponent


why the fuck you boastin, cuz i can serve your ass without even postin/1 with my verses, i make the most kid, cuz i know niggas get burned like counrty roast man/2

^^ longish lines...but works because of ur rhyming..punch was only eh


and you sayin i suck you couldn't get bouty even if you & prince ass fucked/9
and that verse was luck my fame goin up like white bitches with butt/10

^^ uh..name one

imma leave yo ass lost like i left my date, its a verbal caution when i spit- put up yellow tape, cuz this kid is gettin fucked up like i slipped him date rape/16

^^ not so sure i like the set up here...

LM, ur punches needed to be stronger, with better metas and wordplay. But, this was enough to be aiight.


Vote: LM

omg finaly a good battle on this shit man

aiight- just like your name your shit was allright man you need to work on them punches hittin harder man those played ones is what killed you

lm - nice man word play was your key to success word man period that was how you pulled this off not to mrnthion the fact that your punches were stickin nasty

god job gental men

v/ lm

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Vote Lyrical Method but whats up with my battle?