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Old 05-25-04, 12:32 AM   #1
DeaDly RhymeZ 01
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" Next Genaration "

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Ayo,Ya'll can hate, and Discrimanate,pass da certin weight,catch yall inna room 2 masterbate...

rhymes despite the lost of fate,fatal murders i was derre 2 slate,squash mc's like a Dog Steppin onna Grape...

put ya in da Bars so ya can find tanky ya soul mate,hop ova da first fence but cant past 2 second gate...

check in 2 da un-slayed memba's but ya 2 late,cause im da 1 too take ya wife out onna date...

and as da years go by u get released at a damn slo pace,shouldint of ever sprayed da Cop wit MACE...



Nigga i go down and i get ma Reputaion...
But afta ma hot instinkz itz da Next Genaration...
Got niggaz wait wit madd antisapation...
but i rip vetz n newbiez datz why im the next Sensation...

Rhymes In Discize, as i dEspise, my flowz wise...
I shoot ya as many pepperonis are on pizza Pies, me losein 1 n dats not a Lie...

WEll i spit sick,dont tlak shit,sikk wit it,killin wit ma cliuqe...
aint kno bitch,Legends all so sick,no fuckin wit This...

Got ya Flow under contract witta damn lease...
dont come up 2 me with out ya damn Peice...
Cause ill kill u then i'll go for ur damn neese...
Cause my flows so fire i'll melt ya like a damn peice,of damn cheese...


Nigga i go down and i get ma Reputaion...
But afta ma hot instinkz itz da Next Genaration...
Got niggaz wait wit madd antisapation...
but i rip vetz n newbiez datz why im the next Sensation...
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Old 05-25-04, 01:19 AM   #2
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decent song dawg

i surmise this is audio?

rhyming was nice..vocab good

flow pretty good

up imagery


7/10 drop


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Old 05-25-04, 01:24 AM   #3
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Good Look on feed back ^^^^^^ Uppin fo more Feed back come on peepz
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Old 05-25-04, 01:29 AM   #4
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it was all right....dont be pissed i didnt like it but i wasnt feelin the whole thing,... it was still nice tho
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Old 05-25-04, 01:30 AM   #5
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HuH i didint get that Feed Back Whoaaaaaaaaaaa?????????? Uppin Fo Feed Back
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Old 05-25-04, 02:11 PM   #6
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it wasnt to badd i give it a 6/10 u need to do a lil more elevcatin but not bad........................
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Old 05-25-04, 11:03 PM   #7
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Damn 4-4 lol
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Old 05-26-04, 12:45 AM   #8
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Uppin Fo' Feed Back Come On Niggas Uppin Uppin!!!!!!!
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Old 05-29-04, 01:43 AM   #9
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Yo YO YURRRRRr uppin FO Feed back na mein COME ON COMEON!! YO YOY O
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