shdow your an idiot...go to everyone in original rb and say that structure sucks balls and see what happens...you'll get RAPED

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NiCe Battle 2 Diffrent Styles But This Is My Break Down...

look kid, I'ma beat your ugly head open
you're better off....
than online, so just log out instead of postin
Pretty Nice 8/10

I'm launchin the end.... of you're RB career
DeLeon's got the Blueprint
.................of my fuckin fist on his ear
^^ Didnt Get That 6/10

kids got the brains of a chimp, catch my drift?
got the jump off poppin...
when he landed at the bottom of the cliff
NiCe-8/10

no surprise he comes dope, when it's me he's facin
DeLeon's on my dick
so when I get hard, he'll rise to the occasion
DeScent-7/10
call me the laugh doctor, shit almost comical
I have no patients....
& I need some, so I'ma put him in the hospital
No PUnch Or Personal Didnt Feel It 7/10
like you 68'd me
..................I leave you owe 'n one
Alright--8/10

overall verse-8.2/10
Deleon

Mods…U really want me to square wit him…Aight…here I come
I’ll feed your tank top w/ pellets like fer fish in an aquarium
Pretty descent 7.5/10

Call this an obstacle?...please who said this kid's a threat?
im sending him back to square one like rookie smokers on their 1st cigarette
Alright 7.6/10
This is how a Hard-Wood Class-sick suppose to go your rep is getting torn
hes an alias…but your verses need extension cords….. to get restored
MNice 8.7/10
Murkin this herb wont land me any kind of respect….
Cuz hes known to talk out his ass like Eddie Murphy in Shrek
LOL 9/10
What I write kills….play your role and follow Capitols drills
cuz Even If You Put Aleve In A Rope you couldn’t tie-pill (type ill)....
Nice 8.6/10

So I’m gonna finish this herb and put an end to his text..
History Repeats itself watch another Sire get sentenced to the death....
Alright 8/10

Overall verse 8.6/10

Winner Deleon

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sire had good wordplay.punches and flow,his structure was okay but coulda been better...
deleon u had good punches also,including flow and structure..

but with better wordplay,and flow,and also harder hittin punches my vote goes to......


v/sire

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Sire
look kid, I'ma beat your ugly head open
you're better off....
than online, so just log out instead of postin
6/10....wordplay was there but the punch was weak
I'm launchin the end.... of you're RB career
DeLeon's got the Blueprint
.................of my fuckin fist on his ear
7.5/10....i like the concept..good play on his crew name
kids got the brains of a chimp, catch my drift?
got the jump off poppin...
when he landed at the bottom of the cliff
7/10...decent
no surprise he comes dope, when it's me he's facin
DeLeon's on my dick
so when I get hard, he'll rise to the occasion
7/10..liked the punch but the phrase is played
call me the laugh doctor, shit almost comical
I have no patients....
& I need some, so I'ma put him in the hospital
7/10...it was ight
beatin me's impossible... let it go, it's over son
like you 68'd me
..................I leave you owe 'n one
8/10...i see where u were goin with this...i like the wordplay...by far ur best bar

Overall-42.5/60....good flow and wordplay...punches could of come harder..personals and name plays were ight...pretty good verse

Deleon:
Mods…U really want me to square wit him…Aight…here I come
I’ll feed your tank top w/ pellets like fer fish in an aquarium
8/10...dope punch...good wordplay
Call this an obstacle?...please who said this kid's a threat?
im sending him back to square one like rookie smokers on their 1st cigarette
8/10...1st line decent..2nd dope (this line aint stretched whoever said that?)
This is how a Hard-Wood Class-sick suppose to go your rep is getting torn
hes an alias…but your verses need extension cords….. to get restored
7/10...pretty decent
Murkin this herb wont land me any kind of respect….
Cuz hes known to talk out his ass like Eddie Murphy in Shrek
8/10...haha funny and creative..solid punch
What I write kills….play your role and follow Capitols drills
cuz Even If You Put Aleve In A Rope you couldn’t tie-pill (type ill)....
8.5/10...dope ish right there...i used an aleve line kinda similar once haha good shit D
So I’m gonna finish this herb and put an end to his text..
History Repeats itself watch another Sire get sentenced to the death....
7/10...ight...it was good but the punch was lacking for a closer

Overall-46.5/60...better then sire's verse...i was feelin ur punches more i liked ur wordplay better..it flowed just fine...dope shit homie

Vote-Deleon...he came harder

Deleon-Took this easy with nothing to say, You had
harder punches and you had what a battles needs to
win like similies and metaphores

Sire-Nice spit but the structure made it hard for me to
read but I thought you did aight but Not good enough to beat him
but its all good

v/deleon

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5-2....mods is this battle over?

It's over son..... good job.

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