I think Vango got this quite easily...overall...he won on the flow, the structure (i dont like it when people edit their font size...personals and wordplay...also the discharge line was good research and props to that.

Shadow i was left dissapointed by ur verse to be honest...i expected u to come harder in this but clearly u werent...not a bad verse but not a winning one sorry dawg.

V/Vango

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vango-

gud structure n flow throughout, hit with some nice punches n personals liked the shadows edge line, original and funny, thought ur verse was gud...

8/10

shadow-

you had a few gud lines but i felt some of ya stuff was abit filler, some lines were attemptin to punch but not really hittin that hard, gud structure n flow but not enough hard punches...

7/10

v/vango


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Shadow-You Came Pretty NiCe Your Verse Was Good It Didnt Match Up To Vangos He Really Ripped It....You Had Personals But Failed Punches....Your Deop Had A NiCe Flow
8.7/10

Vango..That Tha Hardest I Seen You Came As The Battles I Looked At..You Had Some Tight Punches And Personals And A NiCe Drop..Just Shorten Yo Lines Unless You Do Multis....
9/10

Winner-Vango...

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Shadow:

your rhythmatically repugnant and ur flow is off track....
just like ya crew it must be a fam thing blueprint is also wack....
^^good personal nice opener 7/10
just how DML merked u il give u a blast from the past....
and revoke only gassed you up so u think u got a chance...
^^ehh decent 5/10
quit rappin...take a hint even jesus tryin to give you a sign...
yes they predicted you but your skill dont match half of mine...
^^basic 5/10
raps not ur thing..just like O'J's glove son...it just dont fit...
but you are an artist...... known for creating complete shit....
^^good meta decent punch 6/10
you winning? wouldnt happen try 2 wish uppon a shootin star....
post ur verse in a golf course and it still couldnt be up to par...
^^ehh Ok 5/10
i dont have to punch hard son you couldnt take the blunt of it...
ur an easy win.. and im doing it just for the " pun" of it....
^^nice 7/10
ill beat you like a hillbilly's spouse..trap and squash u like a mouse...
u call people wack..dont throw stones if u live in a glass house.....
^^too basic 4/10
u fooled me..i thought u were good but u aint. u think thats cold..?....
.......give up now and admit to ur crew how their leader.......
got merked by a 14 year old.......
^^closer weak 3/10

overall : 42/80

Vango:

Let's get this battle started Shadow and commence with the realness
Even if your computer had a virus you wouldnt have Textual-Illness
^^seen something like this before but good personal 7/10
I heard you were good at topical, wake up Shadow this is a battle
You couldn't even come original your like Shadows Edge's Shadow
^^lol good shyt 8/10
This site needs to stop gassing you kid cuz you need no encouragement
Don't worry about anyone feeding your lyrics dont provide any nourishment
^^decent 6/10
I've merked half your roster kid and yes that includes your Leader
Sent Limited Edition home crying and Revoked membersip from the cheater
^^ehh ok 4/10
The other half of your roster well they tried to get in my crew
Simply put we don't take rejects thats why your not wearing BLUE
^^weak 4/10
Two leaders in your crew do you even really know whose in charge
This battles like your alias, Shadow you've been officially "Discharged"
^^good closer nice personal 8/10

overall : 37/60

vote: Vango He Obviously Came Harder And Put Some Effort Into This Battle Both Of You Need To Work On Harder Punches And Better Personals

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