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Old 07-27-04, 07:44 AM   #1
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Old 07-27-04, 12:00 PM   #3
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Old 07-29-04, 03:10 PM   #4
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Niggas throwing tomatos at you, is the only way youll "Ketch-up"...
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Old 07-30-04, 06:22 PM   #5
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SR Goes For A Punch, Like The High 5 It Just Flew By For The Miss..
Only Reason..
..................We Know Him Is Because Of The Top 10 Teenagers List..

Going Personal Unlike You..
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Upping this for votes straight away..
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Old 07-30-04, 07:58 PM   #7
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Shabba Ranks wins.

Whats up with ur structure Rascal...u didnt use it right at all.

On the second line it should go like this.

Set up...
...punch

You totally screwed it over. It really took away from how hard your punch could have been.

Shabba Ranks had dope wordplay. I liked his punch.

Rascal had the personal, but it didnt connect good enough.

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Shabba Ranks wins.
Whats up with ur structure Rascal...u didnt use it right at all.
On the second line it should go like this.
Set up...
...punch
You totally screwed it over. It really took away from how hard your punch could have been.
Shabba Ranks had dope wordplay. I liked his punch.
Rascal had the personal, but it didnt connect good enough.
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So you mean..

SR Goes For A Punch, Like The High 5 It Just Flew By For The Miss..
Only Reason We Know Him Is.. Because Of The Top 10 Teenagers List..

or

SR Goes For A Punch, Like The High 5 It Just Flew By For The Miss..
Only Reason We Know Him Is..
..................... Because Of The Top 10 Teenagers List..

which one?
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he meant it goes like this...


THISISTHESETUP..............
..............THISISTHEPUNCH

^Could be Longer or shorter, dependign on how your line is flowing..

but i agree with mem.. Rascal although you had the personal... you should have used that against him.. you just mentioned it.. you gotta make him look bad... you didnt really.. it had potential, but you didnt execute it right.. nice thought tho...
Shabba yours was coo.. was a decent punch.. i give it to you because you connected it at least =/..

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Vote Rascal, Shabba Concept Bout Ketchup Played And Didnt End It Strong Just Some Wordplay..... Rascal More Original And Hit Harder...

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Shabba...The Ketch Up Line Is Real Played And You Know This....And Match Up Ketch Up That Dont Rhyme...2nd Line Was Streched A LiL.....Rascal Your Punch Was Weak Too... I Agree With Everyone Else About Your Structure...The Personal Was Decent.. The First Line Was The Weakest Thing I Have Seen This Week So Far...

Close Battle

Shabba Ranks: 5.7/10
Rascal: 5.6/10

Even Tho He Had A Played Line Your First Line And Structure Made You Lose

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Old 07-31-04, 03:28 AM   #13
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Rascal
So you mean..

SR Goes For A Punch, Like The High 5 It Just Flew By For The Miss..
Only Reason We Know Him Is.. Because Of The Top 10 Teenagers List..

or

SR Goes For A Punch, Like The High 5 It Just Flew By For The Miss..
Only Reason We Know Him Is..
..................... Because Of The Top 10 Teenagers List..

which one?


It doesnt matter...but

Only reason..

Is NOT a set up...

you could use either one of those, but u gotta seperate the set up from the punch RIGHT.
 
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Shabba: 3 points..

Rascal: O

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