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View Poll Results: Street Legend vs ArchAngel
Street Legend 2 28.57%
â€- ArchAngel â€- 5 71.43%
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Old 08-29-04, 12:04 AM   #16
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how the fuck a nigga gonna try to vote in ELEVATED frontlines wit 3 post....

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Old 08-29-04, 01:47 AM   #17
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Voted For: Street Legend

closer: ARCH ANGEL- nice way to close the battle i must say, Street urs wasn't bad but i was feelin' his..

opener: STREET- arch urs wasn't bad but in the same bar u said "public eye" then "blind eye" frustratin'.. watch word usage, don't repeat urself..

flow: STREET- simple every bar rhymed plus it wasn't complicated as if when ur speakin' it.. that's a +.. arch ur flow was messed up for mo' stretched lines altho, street had sum stretched urs were crazy.. messin' up ya flow..

Structure: Tie, ya'll both had similar structures, good and bad points no one stood out more than the other..

Vocab: Arch-hands down

Multis: Arch- also close but he took this too..

Metas: No one..

punches: Street every bar had nice punches.. Arch had nice ones too but not as effective..

Personals: STreet- the dq thing with arch vs. empire was used well for his 2nd bar, then the post count and sittin' at the computer thing.. arch really lacked personals this time.

Street came harder even tho his verse didn't have as much vocab complexity, he had the better flow in general and punches hit hard too, so yea, that's the explanation.. no hate either, and note* to STREET- don't mention that ur verse is weak, in reality it wasn't it makes people think u didn't try/ actually care bout the battle.. it wasn't weak that's sho enuff.. you got this, STREET..
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Old 08-29-04, 01:49 AM   #18
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This was feedback posted for Street Legend

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jus checkin it out...can't vote ya'll...................
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Old 08-29-04, 01:57 AM   #19
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Dave you Son of a Bitch! this "6".... I thought you only did poetry?
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Old 08-29-04, 02:09 AM   #20
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^^thank you...ima take ya tips...my verse wasnt weak man this was a good battle hahaha
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Old 08-29-04, 02:13 AM   #21
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first bar your hung out to dry,like jesus bitch i crucify... place you in the public eye with raps like that they'd turn a blind eye...
LOL GOOD OPENER
i'm shining bright with lyrics thats fluorescent,bitch is dull hire a cosmetic...
ALRIGHT
touch up them lyrics shits pathetic you aint a battler just more poetic...
GOOD PERSONAL
my shits leaving Street parasympathetic 'n' dont think i'll be sympathetic...
i'll diss 'n' rip ya like a surfer rips tides then up 'n' leave fuck being apologetic...
LOL GOOD
it's the way my brain ticks that says unload these clips fill em with lead...
so much i could flip this inbred 'n' write my next track with his head...
LMAO GOOD LINE
with lyrics so sick i'll leave u malcontent as i beat you with circumvent...
thats my intent i torment mc's so much they need there parents consent...
LMAO NICE PUNCH
like parental guidance as i carry a warning cas i spill blood and guts...
so get off my nuts,bitch could'nt be a smash if you was a dish washer klutz...
NEVER HEARD THAT NICE


all and all you both came good the reason i didnt show the other kids is cause his shit fell off towards the middle arch angel stayed consistant and for that reason i vote:


Vote: Archangel
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Old 08-29-04, 04:09 PM   #22
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Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-

Street Legend
structure is pretty good.. flow is good for the most part.. u had a few multis.. wordplay was ok.. but some was just wack.. a few, at best, of ur punches connected.. attempted personals.. but most of them were wack..

â€- ArchAngel â€-
structreu is pretty good.. flow is pretty good as well.. u had a few multis.. wordplay was dope.. some of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
both had a decent structure.. both had a decent flow.. both had a few multis.. neither had good personals.. â€- ArchAngel â€- had the better wordplay, as well as more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. â€- ArchAngel â€- gets my vote..

VOTE - â€- ARCHANGEL â€-
 
Old 08-29-04, 04:12 PM   #23
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Archangel- i like his verse....had some nice lines in there...his punches were good...some hit pretty hard ya know...his structure was good too only 1 line was strechted...his wordplay was some what decent...but overall i gotta give this to him for better structure and better punches...

Street Legend- his verse was pretty good too...but i didnt enjoy it that much...his punches some what were decent...just that they didnt hit hard enough ya know...his structure was decent...his wordplay decent also...but overall he tryed...but ive seen your other battles...but you just came weak in dis one...

v/Archangel....
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Old 08-29-04, 04:17 PM   #24
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This boy says he was sent by God, after this death i might be regretfull
not special, but my flow is made of flames it gets compared to the devil
3/10
use "artificial intelligence to notice the length of ya verse
angel cursed, pretend i'm empire and get ya dq punched first
3/10
Ima give u a lethal injection, put this ..God.. on the cross
not from a bullet out the Mag, against Empire..admit it u lost
2/10
Riddle me this,whats up wit all the different screen names?
You must lost to vets, on this one u smashin newbies, you should be ashamed
3/10
You got over 1ooo post, you just joined two months ago
you no life havin nigga at the computer u must be comfortable
2/10
Deadly when i deliver the one two, lookin for a first round k.o
duckin ass nigga you betta stay low, cuz i got more tricks up my sleeve then that nigga A.o
4/10


Ya punches were weak wordplay was weak ya structure was about the best thing u had goin 4 u in this drop it wasent the worst verse but it was far far from the best. you need 2 elevate and get a high vocab that will help u out alot


first bar your hung out to dry,like jesus bitch i crucify... place you in the public eye with raps like that they'd turn a blind eye.
6/10..
i'm shining bright with lyrics thats fluorescent,bitch is dull hire a cosmetic...
touch up them lyrics shits pathetic you aint a battler just more poetic...
5/10
my shits leaving Street parasympathetic 'n' dont think i'll be sympathetic...
i'll diss 'n' rip ya like a surfer rips tides then up 'n' leave fuck being apologetic...
4/10
it's the way my brain ticks that says unload these clips fill em with lead...
so much i could flip this inbred 'n' write my next track with his head...
3/10
with lyrics so sick i'll leave u malcontent as i beat you with circumvent...
thats my intent i torment mc's so much they need there parents consent...
like parental guidance as i carry a warning cas i spill blood and guts...
so get off my nuts,bitch could'nt be a smash if you was a dish washer klutz...
4/10

Punches were weak and wordplay was pretty good u had some nice wordplay and nice complexity ya punches were not hittin hard at all seems like u tried 2 use your High vocab words as your punches and it jus made the flow hard 2 follow


Ok battle
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Old 08-29-04, 06:05 PM   #25
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aight thank yall for these votes
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Old 08-29-04, 11:23 PM   #26
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Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-

iight

Arch-your shit was pretty good... Your punches hit hard and i was feeling your metas... your flow was onpoint and your structure was better then streets...keep up your shit man... your personals was on point aswell

streets-your ish was okay... not really anything that special or anything but it was okay... flow was there but a littl off in places... Structure was okay but stretched in places aswell... punches was okay but not really anything special.... keep tryin
 
 


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