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07-01-02, 03:33 PM | #1 | ||||||
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"Back n Forth style" feat K-oss
IP: 2F1C 584D
Yo this is me and ma man K-oss and we did this in like 10 mins, so tell us how u think about it.
Yo in the street we gotta hold the heat like pubuerty kidz ya alwayz gettin yo meat beat catz stay gettin' decieced for the mind they speak tha weak can keep WACC for us we spit for tha meek(ill) little kids get decieved into the path of the weak garbage eattin emcees but still find room to speak Stay dirty wit no broom to sweep instead we sweep hard hittin lyricz of yo feet Plus stash the hash in the jeep, and cash we recieve money and high price clothes is only to deceive tay high with the weed while ya smoke the weak leave just cheatin yo' self when ya spit, like Ace'z up yo sleeve Repeat one's rhyme and your neck gets cleaved shots received to tha core, spit tha type to make ya eardrums sore The heat is so much it's like we keep the sun in the 4's so ILL like we sweat viruses out our pores Stay strapped while we let the gums come out your jaw flabbin and stabbin ya, fakez get dey mouth turned raw Then spill courvasiour on you, so you can burn more bleed more, gutz n stuff everywhere like horror gore Then put you in a black bag like grocery food trying to act gangsta but ya call out peeps like 'RADICAL DUDE' We were send to earth to roast you fools scab ova from lying in ya own blood pools Last edited by F-Money Bags : 07-01-02 at 03:35 PM. |
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07-01-02, 04:06 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: B27F 729A
yo shit was hott cypha put togetha real quicc. ayo dont sleep on this cuzzinz up this shit.
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07-01-02, 11:52 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 2F1C 584D
Hell no yall ain't sleepin' on this shit^^^^^
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07-02-02, 04:02 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 2F1C 584D
Do yall ever wake up....damn
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07-02-02, 05:37 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: D27D 0B18
i was feeling this in certain places, but i seen better from you f, and the other dude i never even heard your shit, but it was aiight, vocab was good enough
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07-03-02, 11:59 AM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 2F1C 584D
Uppin'...
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07-03-02, 11:34 PM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: 2F1C 584D
Uppin'...
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07-04-02, 08:19 PM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: D069 6C00
There was glimpses of this that I liked, what really caught my eye was the rhythm, had good internal rhymes, nice multies and everything was on point... Some wordplay shone aswell, there were areas that were funny, and had a good sense of knowledge... Thought the vocab needed improving slightly, I dont mind simplistic, but this was like nursery rhyme, both of ya combined well... The other aspect ya may need to imporve on is it jus got tedious to read, felt like it werent going no where with this, had no substance to it... Otherwise a very solid drop, showed ya skill and potential, keep dropping and elevate...
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07-04-02, 08:24 PM | #9 | ||||||
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IP: 2F1C 584D
^^^No doubt...good look...1
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07-05-02, 02:02 PM | #10 | ||||||
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Upp...
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07-06-02, 01:09 AM | #11 | |||||||
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nice..
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aysho, F-money and K-oss, i dont know if yall got crews, but yall 2 r undeniably nice, i've seen sum of ya stuff, and i wanted to know if u wanted to holla @ Dark Intent, we want 1 or 2 more ill cats for text, and yall are, as previously stated, undeniably nice, ya'll wanna peep us?? holla back in the Royal Spades Div. 2 thread in crews, 1luv.
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