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11-20-04, 06:02 PM
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Rainy Dayz...
IP: 52FB 3AA1
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1745354
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1745350 aight this is a collab i was asked to get on...Frst is Anxiety wit his first audio track so big ups to him..then my nigga DeadlyVision...then me...so yall enjoy aight... http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/s...osophamusic.htm
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11-20-04, 09:15 PM
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..."6s"...
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IP: 7953 1A91
1st dude...
listening to him right now, some dope lyrics but the flow is pretty off, and it doesnt seem to flow very smoothy could use some work on timing. 2nd dude... some dope effects, good producing, all of his S's sound weird, great flow this part of the song was dope... 3rd dude... (you) wow some awesome lyrics, i was def feeling this shit. I can relate to you alot, "middle school days i was teased for fun now im bigger then ever, i dont need to run" that was a pretty dope line right there. Honestly i think ya drop was the best. The first drop could be better, but all in all a pretty dope song (return the favor)
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11-21-04, 03:28 AM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 3499 9DC2
*listening*
Lol....I remember this Anx.....anyway, I gave you the feedback for your verse already. DV......what's up with the SSSSSSSS shit with your audios now? Flow was cool, but it seemed like you had an odd number of lines. Diabolic flowed ok, kinda slow though. Lyrics were alright from all.....anyway, keep dropping 
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11-21-04, 04:48 AM
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5/27/83 A CHAMP WAS BORN
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IP: F751 2D88
1st dude good for his first audio flow and elivery couyld use some work
2nd guy flow was nice delivery was good to lyrics were str8 effects were pretty coo 3rd diabolic flow was str8 voice and mic presense is good lyrics were nice over-all pretty tight collab the mixing maybe could have been done a bit better were the verses connected good ish anyway -peace-
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11-21-04, 11:21 AM
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Blow Me
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IP: 3B54 8295
dope... really enjoyed this track.. not feeling anxiety's verse much.. and yeah dv seems like odd number of lines.. and i wasnt feeling all the effects too much.. diabolic.. u dropped a HOT verse...
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11-22-04, 06:26 PM
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You Love My Style.
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IP: 5572 2B68
Damn i prolly did 2much hiss reduction...
lol sssssssssssssssssssss but this had actually no real topic. We just did it in 5 min to 15
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11-22-04, 06:50 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 28AD 5545
hmmm, i love this beat,it gets you pumped....anxiety, not bad, but your flow was a little off, deadly, your verse was good,lyrics, and felt the emotion in it, kinda loud tho, and the ss,you know, diabolic, you did great in this too, good flow and delivery, overall great job guys....1
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