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Old 07-28-02, 12:15 AM   #16
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Thanks For actually Showin .. Votes PLZ ..
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Old 07-28-02, 04:00 AM   #17
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um .. votes ?
 
Old 07-28-02, 08:09 AM   #18
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Unfuccwittable took this shyt fa reals. Blacc flame's only hard punch in my eyes was his cereal bar one, and un had an array of punches that took out the rest of blacc's. I would've liked to of seen more from blacc.
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Old 07-28-02, 09:20 AM   #19
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It seemed to me like these two verses were a just sort of thrown together. I know that Black Flame's verse last week was far more impressive than this one, and I believe that UFW's was too, but I could be wrong.

UFW...It's Week 8..My 8th Bar And i Just ATE THE WEAK..
Your Knee's Shake - FUCK I Hate This Geek ..
'EAT FAKE' Like 'BK' U Cant 'TASTE THE MEAT'!
Nice lines. That was one of my favorite sections.

Strangle Ya, I'll Hand You-a .. L - EH(A) ..
And Kid i'm Not Abbreviating LOS ANGELES
LOL.

Had 'PUSSY IN YA MOUTH' ..
And Still Couldnt 'KEEP A STRAIGHT FACE'
That was funny.

Overall your verse had some nice creative punches, but your rhyme scheme was hard to latch onto. Probably would have been more conducive to audio. Also, it took a little while for your verse to heat up.

Black Flame...
but like cereal bars i rip your
(w)raps because your
contents break fast/ under prussure
you'll get rock like coal into
diamond, sun call me a eclipse
the way i stop you from shining/
your audio are bootee stop,
your not on beat like a off
duty cop
This secton was alright, as was the "hit dummies" line.

Vote: Black Flame for a more consistant verse.

Peace
 
Old 07-28-02, 10:18 AM   #20
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UNFUCK KILLED THE OTHER KAT...HE HAD CONTINUAL PUNCHES...AND A VERY CREATIVE RHYME SCHEME....

UMM FLAME HAD OUNCHES AND VERY WIERD RHYME SCHEME...IT WAS HARD TO FOLLOW HIS FLOW WITH THOSE REALLY SMALL BARS....I FELT HIS PUNCHES BUT, AS OPSSOED TO UNFUCKWITABLE, HE WAS OUTMATCHED N OUTPUNCHED....

THIS I AN ABVIOUS ONE...JUS READ IT...

VOTE - UNFUCK
 
Old 07-28-02, 03:13 PM   #21
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vote = Unfuckwithable

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Damn Unfuckwithable came hard as fuck....Black Flame's verse was mad nice but I thought it could'ev been longer to match up with Unfuckwithable...so my vote goes to Unfuckwithable for coming with more punches and a nice flow...1
 
Old 07-28-02, 03:48 PM   #22
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UnFuck dominated this battle obviously though.....

*UnFuckWithAble*

Quote:
Yo, I'll Leave Your Back Sprained You Fool ..
Wut a Wack Name To Use - I'll 'PASS WIND' ..
And Change That BLACK FLAME TO BLUE!!<>


Good opening bar....

Quote:
Leave This Fool Wrecked Quick, Ya HeadLess ..
I'm Cruel ..Ya Necks-Spilt .. So Now Your ..Makin
it 'BIG TIME' Cause Ur Workin wit COOL EDIT?<>


Ha! Ha! Funny shit...

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So Taste - Tape .. This Fake's - Raped ..
Your GAY - Flame .. Had 'PUSSY IN YA MOUTH' ..
And Still Couldnt 'KEEP A STRAIGHT FACE' !! <>


Played punch like the Timothy MacVeigh one...

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It's CLEAR .. I Offend Fear - Your Friends are..
QUEERS .. I Bend - Careers..I Bet BLACK FLAME Is ..
The Only One Thats HERE .. IN 10 YEARS !!<>


HA! HA! HA! That 10 years shit was funny as hell and a good personal....


Black Flame

Quote:
This battle is not jail you
can't bail son, you could
burn all your food and
couldn't make anything
well done/


Opener wasn't good at all to me....

Quote:
honestly your
lines straight bore me yo,
how could your name be
unfuckwitable when lil south
herbed you in audio/[quote]

Wasn't feelin' the first line but the second one was a pretty decent personal....

[quote]your finished there is no
reason for counting votes,
you never be hiking cause
your never seen moutin' goats/
(mountian)


This endin' was weak as hell....you must've been really pressed for time....


I gotta say Un took this with ease....
Vote=*UnFuckWithAble*
 
Old 07-28-02, 04:46 PM   #23
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UNFUCKWITHABLE WINS

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UNFUCKWITHABLE- 5-0



BLACKFLAME- 9-1 GONE BUT NOT FORGOTTEN UNTILL HE RETURNS
 
 


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