i thought this was pretty aight..

chorus: was aight i thought.. flow was good on it.. lyrics was aight..

verses - liked the second one better.. the first was cool... ya flow kinda got repetitive.. but it was decent...

quality was decent..

overall a decent track man.. keep droppin

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

Okay track homie... Didn't really like the lyrics much but the POINT of the track was ill

good quality - but u shoulda put more time into writting

Yah' mean? Stay up bra bra

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Taj-He-Spitz... You lookin at a problem!

good quality first off.
hook: nice hook, not too flashy, not too weak. goes well with the song, and the beat
verse 1: nice lyrics, good emotion, n made it interesting. made me want to keep listening
verse 2: same thing, and i was still bobbin my head (on everything, lol. im still bobbin my head to it, and im done listening to it
verse 3: dopeness. same thing. nice lyrics. good ender to a good song. i cant remember one flaw in this one. oh, nvm tha beat was wack, but when you think about it, it went well wit tha flow, but still a lil wack to me. but other than that, tha song was hot.
creativeness was on point in this and shit
8/10 for me...

iight, pleasantly surprised...

this wasn't bad for the most part, just needed a few things to make this a classic track... first off the hook is somethin Im really feeling, I like the rythym you picked up with it, lyrics are good, just seemed like you could have really made that great with a little more emphasis put into it. Verses are pretty good, just work on your pronounciation cuz you get lazy lips like me occassionally. Presence is o.k, I dunno if your just young, or maybe just need more experience spittin, but theres that edge thats missing, whether its a lack of energy, a developing voice, something, and thats the one thing I noticed... quality was pretty good throughout, all in all worth the listen, keep droppin.

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^^^^ thanks a lot..........

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Quality: Dope
Lyrics: good
Song: getting long at the end
Flow: Cool Cool
Beat: Dope i like it seriously
I like it cuz the song is complete,people always posting a verse and shit,you know what i meen
cool track
return the favor on :
I Wish I Could Die

it was pretty dope..good quality like your title..only thingt im not feelin is the chorus....rest is good

thanks for the feed.......

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