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Old 04-23-05, 11:44 AM   #1
Viva
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RV Intro-I'm only learnin tho!

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Yo, It's my RV intro-duction,
Ima show u my flows like bullets, u duck and dodge 'em
already got criticised by optimistically genius,
i reckon dude's compensating 4 a teeny penis,
who-ever reads this its jus between us
, he asked if i was female and 2 show him my tits,
i think dude would die if he seen a naked bitch!
his dick would get as hard as he acts, if he saw me, the baby wit back but fuck that I'm jus statin facts,
I;m here to learn, to speak and interact wit other lovers of the art that we call rap!
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Old 04-23-05, 12:18 PM   #2
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u need to work on that structure first off...........make shit tight like a box......

ya got potential.........just start battlin so ya can elevate n shit

and stay active.....................

already got criticised by optimistically genius,
i reckon dude's compensating 4 a teeny penis,

^^LMFAO!!! basic but funny!!!
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Old 04-23-05, 12:30 PM   #3
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yeah well thanx 4 the advice, thats what im here 4!
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Old 04-23-05, 01:45 PM   #4
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good shit...need a lil work but u gon b iight
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Old 04-23-05, 03:18 PM   #5
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thanx, i been readin a lot of ur shit its well tight. luv dis site but i aint had a a battle yet so i got nuthin to focuz on wen im rhyming...
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Old 04-23-05, 03:26 PM   #6
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Well go make a call out and beat someone. Best way to learn is to battle. It's better than a lot of stuff I've read. Keep it up girl.
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Old 04-23-05, 07:42 PM   #7
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hey thanx golden dayz! this is sweet, anything y'all can say to help, i can make content no-sweat, its the structure i need work on, it sounds a lot different wen ur actually freestylin than wen ur writing it lol!!!
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Old 04-24-05, 01:03 AM   #8
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hmm...wack...no hate, but this was seriously bad...I'm not gonna be too hard on you because you are brand new, but you need some serious work...No hate, just some constructive critisism...Stay up and elevate ma...1
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Old 04-24-05, 10:21 AM   #10
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yeah thanx, i no, ive been practising by droppin shit in the cyphers so hopefully i'll improve!
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Old 04-24-05, 01:06 PM   #11
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damn she is more active then i was when i was a newb...like i said earlier under my other name...nelson mandela...just tighten it up a lil bit...up ya vocab and complexity and u gon' b iight...keep doin dat cypher shit too...
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Old 04-24-05, 02:09 PM   #12
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haha thanx! i will!
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Old 04-24-05, 04:11 PM   #13
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wow........................
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Old 04-24-05, 04:47 PM   #14
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cxo.............................
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Old 04-24-05, 06:39 PM   #15
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wha......pulse? whats cxo?
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